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04.04.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Afterglow -


    In the haze of the evening sun
    Let the wind dry your tears
    Neptune fork, used wisely on the rough waves
    Everything we fear and everything we hope for
    - truce to God
    At some point the darkness must yield to the light

    The golden edge of the porcelain plates
    human ignorance - totally worthless
    However, the bliss of ignorance is an illusion
    Hindsight blushing in the afterglow
    illuminated by a light purple hue
    A serene sense of peace
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Beaufort Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 7:17 AM
Anne-Lise, a lot to think about...human thought and what we don't really know or control. The beginning sets the tone as we can use what's given to us to try to have a life with some value. Hopefully, we are lucky enough. I feel lucky to have made it this far!!! Smiles!!!
George Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 5:26 AM
Beautifully written. There is hope that even in mistakes, we get hindsight as an afterglow. All the best dear Anne. Hugs!
Singh Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 7:48 PM
Inspiring.Wish you the best
Suri Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 6:53 PM
This is stunning!! Your imagery and analogies is so artistic and avant-garde!! Great write :)
DiMino Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 6:19 PM
Somehow it all works out, for the best usually. I learned by trial and big-blunder...but I would have learned far less had I not been foolishly daring. Profound write.
Kendrick Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 3:47 PM
Creative lines and very descriptive. Thanks for sharing them with us. A sense of peace. Sara K
Godwin Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 2:25 PM
I read several times, letting your meaning soak deeper and deeper into my understanding, and there it did dawn ... beautifully ... CayCay
Empress Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 12:40 PM
This is absolutely gorgeous! I love your choice of words and soulful depth of your word weaving here and the way youv written in such an artistic manner along with the picture! Just stunning! I need to do this contest too! Best wishes to you! Sending you light always dear anne lise
Cunningham Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 12:18 PM
A verse that gives you hope. Good luck Anne Lise and have a lovely weekend. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 12:00 PM
Loved those final 4 lines! Eventually coming to terms, finding peace. Well, I have to stop writing, but today the muse was helping!! Hugs and happy weekend, dear poet!
Read Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 11:32 AM
Lovely poem and picture Anne, good luck in the contest,have a lovely evening. xx
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