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Afterglow

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Afterglow Contest

Ardor abated Bodies both Collapse Damp Erotic Fulfillment Gains giddy High Intense Kiss keepers Lingering Melting moves Nestle Narvana Optimal Passionate Release Sated Touch Unleashes Verve vapor Whispers wanting Xanadu Zees

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Ron VanHooser

Date: 5/28/2025 7:23:00 PM

Oh my! Absolutely! Every touch, every breath, everything. Exceptional work CayCay!

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/29/2025 1:27:00 PM

That's what My Tim said (the man I've shared life with for 13 joyous, fulfilling years.) If not for him, I'd still be hiding my poems due to lack of confidence. I digress. Wrote this for a contest called 'Afterglow', it didn't place but I long ago realized placement has much to do with much else rather than the poem itself (my opinion.) My muse uses them for fuel. All that you've shared with me today has flared joy in me ... CayCay

Lyric Man

Date: 5/16/2025 6:37:00 AM

Here's a silly little echo to your masterpiece: "HOT" Aching anticipation Brushed breathless Crave coiled Delicate delay Eager edges Fluttering fingers Glances that graze Hovering heat Invisible ignitions Junctures upcoming Knees knocked Lips linger Murmured mysteries Not now— Oh, not yet Pulses poised Quiet quakes Ravenous restraint Yikes: The temperature warning just popped up on my phone... so let's hold that thought and let the longing linger............

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/16/2025 1:56:00 PM

Rock it, Lyric Man, I am impressed with the creativity you surely came up with rather quickly in your comments; your comments + my poem made me decide to thank you and walk away. It's already hot enough here in Florida. I'll never understand why this didn't place in the Afterglow contest. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Paige Hind

Date: 4/21/2025 9:09:00 PM

Such a breathtaking abecedarian. The best I read yet. :) Take a bow! <3

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/5/2025 10:24:00 AM

- A beautiful romance, CayCay :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 4/3/2025 2:27:00 AM

A beautiful abcedarian dear cay cay! Love your choice of words for each letter especially the ending! Zees! Thats clever and unique ! Would havr never thought of that word for the letter z ! Fun write! So well delivered! Pleasure reading your poem today ! Sending you light always

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/3/2025 1:45:00 AM

I can see the afterglow from afar. Great sensation. Poetic hugs.

Karen Jones

Date: 4/3/2025 1:12:00 AM

After unique write CayCay! The word clusters read like mini poems! Cool beans! Good luck in the contest!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/2/2025 10:04:00 PM

goodness, not only is this offering an afterglow, it is the glow, cay! hugggs and best wishes

Reya Suri

Date: 4/2/2025 5:25:00 PM

Love the words you chose!!! I've never seen a poem from this form, but you make it look so nice!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/2/2025 2:41:00 PM

A sweet afterglow from A to Z! Clap…Clap!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/2/2025 4:48:00 AM

Dear CayCay, As I read I thought how dazzling a cascade of passion and artistry. The clever structure amplifies the rhythm of desire and release, creating a poetic Xanadu that lingers long after reading. You’ve captured the essence of raw emotion with elegance. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/1/2025 3:02:00 PM

What a creative "Afterglow" write you have here. The Abecedarian takes extra time and thought. "Good Luck" Enjoy your blessed/fun day writing away..............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/1/2025 12:57:00 PM

oooh, yes, Caycay, so sensuous!!! You did so great here. Wait till I post mine. It's kind of silly!! I think I'm just all poetry'd out for writing about a thing I don't know that much about!