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After the Windstorm

The buffer and howling is strong through the night, loose tin on a roof puts up a good fight, something goes crashing; something flies past, the moan at the window is ghostly and fast. There’s damage at daylight, and still goes the whine, there is swirl on the wattle, a list on the pine. The strength of the gum trees are tested, but found boughs have been splintered and fell to the ground. Fence lines have gathered the loose and the dead, there’s a terrible lean on a time-honoured shed, and crops on the plains are all twisted about, after the windstorm has finally blown out. The country looks different and definitely prone to the strength and the power of natures war zone. Bittersweet truth lies with heartbreak no doubt after the windstorm has finally blown out. The billabong’s murky; the river flows brown, and carries green pruning, snapped and blown down, chainsaws are cutting what must be thrown out, after the windstorm has finally blown out. After the windstorm, has finally blown out, It’s just one more hurdle to add to the drought, but farmers resilience will win here no doubt, now that the windstorm has finally blown out. ©2004 Lindsay Laurie

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/16/2015 3:03:00 PM
Ah, yes, you bless us with another first-rate story poem. Thank you, Lindsay, for your generosity in sharing talent that enriches all fortunate enough to partake of your poems. You are a treasure.
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Date: 3/16/2015 7:04:00 PM
Another magnificent write from your talented pen Lindsay. This poem flows beautifully with your rhyme! Your imagery is stunning! 7
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 3/17/2015 8:25:00 PM
Thank you once again Connie for reading and writing a fine comment. I think all of us who write about nature have not only a love of our environment but also we need to express it with writing, and in many forms. I guess we could be name observance poets. Regards - Lindsay
Date: 3/15/2015 6:54:00 AM
Hello Lindsay, Just another wonderful poem. You always write to such a high standard. My favourite line: there is swirl on the wattle, a list on the pine Congratulations Lindsay--John
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 3/17/2015 8:17:00 PM
Hello there John... thank you for your kind words. The pine I refer to here was a native cypress. We took a photo of a major mitchell cocky with it's crest blown sideways which indicated how windy it was. Thank you again John - Lindsay
Date: 3/13/2015 10:41:00 PM
I just love this piece Lindsay. Wonderful rhyming pattern and the tale it tells is profound. Great ending!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 3/17/2015 8:09:00 PM
G'day Diane... Thank you for your kind comment Diane. I mulled this poem over in my mind after seeing the destruction through a vineyard and a roadside verge after a freak storm went through. I could barely believe the damage. Thank you Diane - Lindsay
Date: 3/13/2015 3:52:00 AM
Bittersweet truth lies with heartbreak no doubt after the windstorm has finally blown out. Enjoyed reading the wonderful poem.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 3/17/2015 2:47:00 AM
G'day Subash... thanks for reading and leaving a comment. With cyclones last weekend in the north, this poem is timely. Lindsay
Date: 3/12/2015 9:17:00 PM
Worked and loved a Canadianized former Aussie lass! So I tar all Aussie ladies with same brush! Loved this write dear Lindsay! Did you get a chance to check out the limerick i wrote titled, "Lindsay Laurie"? Loving hugs, Jack xx
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Date: 3/13/2015 2:47:00 AM
G'day Jack... oh golly gosh, don't tar all Aussie ladies with the same brush. There is a wide range of attitude like everywhere else. Of course I read your limerick, and I'll work on an answer or two; or three; or four if need be. I've never worked on any limericks really; I do enjoy reading them - Lindsay

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