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Sunrise over the autumn yellow and red trees. Sunrise or sunset over a mountain range and yellow - red autumn trees dressed in blue fog and morning haze. Scenic stock images

After the Storm

After the storm with rain of yesterday
Condensation rises in the hollow
Cobalt clouds struck by the sun so far away

Swallows rise chasing bugs and crows follow
The sun behind the clouds cast an array
Shades of pink magenta slowly swallow

As seconds go by the sky doesn't stay 
Dressed in the same gown with shades of gold
Nor the earlier one of cobalt gray

The sun reaches tops of the pines as of old
Now almost too bright for the poet's eyes
Just when she's ready to poor out her soul 

With aged-spotted, wrinkled hands she'll wave bye
To her place on the porch, thoughts preoccupy     

Not so easy for me to do.
Contest: Five Stanza Terza Rima
Sponsor: L. Milton Hankins
7/9/2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 7/11/2022 12:01:00 AM
You have mastered this Poetry form Sara. Congratuations...
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/11/2022 6:18:00 AM
Thanks, Michael. Sara
Date: 7/10/2022 12:46:00 PM
You did a really good job, Sara. I agree. it's NOT easy but yours is very nice
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/10/2022 2:33:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the time spent here, reading and commenting on my work. Sara
Date: 7/10/2022 7:14:00 AM
You composed a wonderful poem in this hard-to-execute, Sara. Wish all the best in the contest.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/10/2022 2:29:00 PM
Sotto, Thanks for best for the contest. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 7/9/2022 8:28:00 PM
Terza Rima is not quite easy to do. Still youn have made a bold effort ! Wish you all the best in the contest, dear Sara !
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/10/2022 2:28:00 AM
Valsa, Thank you for the visit. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara
Date: 7/9/2022 7:23:00 PM
This is excellent, Sara, love the visual.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/10/2022 2:12:00 AM
Why, thank you, Harry. I liked that picture also. Sara
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