After the Rain

After an hour’s incessant rain On this cloudless evening With the face of the sky Washed clean Globules of water Have speckled the oiled surface Of leaves on arching trees They glisten in the evening light Reflecting kaleidoscopic colors As I look on, they quiver, Dither, wobble and flutter In their effort to balance precariously, Each drop flops down one by one With a sad refrain Flip… plop, flip …plop Leaving ripples in the puddles below In the deep hush of Nature On this twilight evening Their distinct tinkling Falls as music to my ears!
Placed First For Strand’s (1063) Poetry Contest Placed First
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Laurie Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 7:17 PM
Hello Valsa ... what rain can bring is refreshing for our garden and as the days go by the benefits will be on show. I could picture the scene you wrote - thank you Valsa - Lindsay
Alex Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 8:24 PM
Vivid picture. Congratulations!
Mcconnell Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 7:38 PM
Lovely pen Valsa, great imagery and insightful thought too. Really lovely pen. Blessings always,Gordon
Wolf Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 7:11 PM
Amazing! 'Flip - plop, flip - plop.' This reader can't tell the difference between a drip and a drop. ~ gw
Poet Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 11:54 AM
Draw gorgeous sceneries and make your colors shimmer with imagination. In your poem, you brilliantly depicted rain, and the imagery is fantastic. Valsa, you've written a stunning piece.
Leffanta Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 10:28 AM
What a delightful response to "Raindrops keep falling on my head" !
Cunningham Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 5:59 AM
You captured rain well in your verse Valsa, love the imagery. Tom
Pandit Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 5:55 AM
Your descriptions paint the sights and sounds and glisten your hues. A delightful write, Valsa.
Deo Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 12:31 AM
Marvellous. An overseas I dian myself, still rain is lived as life & romance by folk in India. Your respect for Nature allows U a perfectly evocative & living diction. A Fave, Valsa, for sure. ThanX PTL
Buhagiar Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 11:16 PM
I loved your onomatopoeia. of leaves falling. A picturesque poem which with my writer's block I wouldn't be able to write.
Brown Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 8:31 PM
I enjoyed your poem, Valsa. You painted a moving warm picture in my mind.  Blessings ~ Debra
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