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After the Kill

He hears again the far off jiggling of keys in an ignition, as the car rocks his ears magnifying scrapes of sound. eyes still seeing strafing lights on a dim road. He had already turned from the windscreen, A dark evening, a gritty sleet, and under it, the bloodied head, the matted fur, the thin shanks of shock laid bare – then the second car. That car disjoints and deforms a creature into a death-spread. Moths, like dark flowers press against his dazed thoughts. Warm metal ticks on.

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Date: 4/9/2020 4:57:00 PM
Hello Eric Ashfored,You have described a horrible scene. I also felt the pain. Enjoy your evening my friend. Be safe.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/10/2020 1:10:00 PM
Hello Eric, no I won't get nightmares. It was a horrible scene. You are welcomed. Take care. be safe. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 4/9/2020 7:38:00 PM
Hi Darlene, hope you don't get nightmares. Thanks for the comments. Bless
Date: 4/9/2020 1:54:00 PM
You painted a brutal ending...I could feel the pain...Well done
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Eric Ashford
Date: 4/9/2020 2:25:00 PM
Thank you Arturo yes, this is a grim poem for sure. Glad it worked for you!
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Eric Ashford
Date: 4/9/2020 2:25:00 PM
Thank you Arturo yes, this is a grim poem for sure. Glad it worked for you!

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