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After the Drought

primrose coloured sky
grey clouds chase the setting sun…
rain kisses scorched earth

 © Harry J Horsman 2022

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Jennifer Proxenos

April 2, 2022 at 10:32 AM

A superb, vividly created Haiku my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Anne E Sangster - K

March 31, 2022 at 2:02 PM

Your poem paints a perfect image. I enjoyed reading this and could see that primrose sky and those grey clouds chasing the setting Sun. A beautiful piece and a fav for me. Cheers my friend :-)

James Marshall Goff

March 30, 2022 at 12:30 AM

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Judy Ball

March 27, 2022 at 5:19 AM

Beautiful Harry. I do love the rain. Nice job. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick

March 26, 2022 at 4:57 AM

It is so good that the rain has come. We can't make it without the rain watering the good earth. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

March 25, 2022 at 12:38 PM

Dropping by to say hi. Have a lovely weekend, Harry

Heidi Sands

March 25, 2022 at 6:53 AM

Oh this is beautiful. A perfect Haiku Harry ! A FAVE for me :)

Valsa George

March 25, 2022 at 5:21 AM

Here too 'the rain is kissing the scorched earth' ! We have recently got a few showers ! Beautiful Haiku harry !

Eve Roper

March 24, 2022 at 9:47 PM

great imagery, Harry. love it

Michael Tor

March 24, 2022 at 6:15 PM

Great imagery Harry, hope you are well my friend...

Mystic Rose Rose

March 24, 2022 at 4:16 PM

Let it rain kisses all day Harry :)

Michelle Faulkner

March 24, 2022 at 2:31 PM

Reading this, I feel like a late afternoon rainstorm has just passed, leaving everything cool and clean, just lovely~

Debra L Brown

March 24, 2022 at 10:06 AM

A stunning image Harry, enjoyed. "Rain kissed the scorched earth." favorite line. Blessings ~ Debra

Joe Maverick

March 24, 2022 at 1:04 AM

Brilliant ebullient startling..'

Silent One

March 23, 2022 at 2:08 PM

Great imagery and perfect for your title.. a short form, but you used the right words to get your imagery across..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

March 23, 2022 at 1:08 AM

love it, happy thunderstorms xx

Anil Deo

March 22, 2022 at 9:43 PM

Well needed, rain- falling, living - water Haiku. Shalom shalom. Anil

Andrea Dietrich

March 22, 2022 at 5:28 PM

a gorgeous Ku, my friend

Jan Allison

March 22, 2022 at 4:03 PM

fab haiku Harry I especially love that final line its a real gem xx

Kim Rodrigues

March 21, 2022 at 12:44 PM

A welcoming sight, indeed!

James Marshall Goff

March 21, 2022 at 10:27 AM

Congrats Harry! Vivid 'ku!

Mike Gentile

March 21, 2022 at 5:54 AM

Harry, you have selected a perfect title for your haiku! I love the last line! Happy Monday !!

Suzanne Delaney

March 20, 2022 at 3:31 PM

Wonderful scene captured. I can smell the petrichor from here. Best, SuZ

Sotto Poet

March 20, 2022 at 3:05 PM

Stunning Haiku, Harry. You captured a wonderful scene and crafted it eloquently.

Paul Callus

March 20, 2022 at 12:57 PM

You paint beautiful images, Harry. I can already smell the dry soil as it becomes wet with rain. ~ Regards // paul

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