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after my prayer

every evening after my prayer--- the moon so new

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 1/5/2013 5:03:00 PM
just here to say HELLO!!
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Date: 12/11/2012 6:05:00 PM
Dee was right Kash VERY very nice!Time to start entering tthe verses in Frogpond conttests. Light & Love
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Date: 12/10/2012 8:41:00 PM
Ahhhhhhhh, such a RIPE haiku. Oh I love this. Serious. Into my faves it goes. How did you do this? You have saturated 13 syllables with TIME yet retained the present tense, kept us focused on the now while drenching us both in the aspects of the past and the hope in the future. Oh, kash. This is truly rich. I must scope down to see if Debbie has seen this. Hugs, Cyndi
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Date: 12/2/2012 7:05:00 AM
and glowing brighter too as I absorb this luminous Haiku Kash luv,,
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Date: 11/30/2012 1:18:00 PM
Awesome read Kash. I like this very much!!!! :-)
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Date: 11/29/2012 11:34:00 AM
hiya, kashi.... love the tone of this 'ku.. endearing and wowie.. soupy!.:) huggs
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Date: 11/29/2012 7:52:00 AM
I can't believe I have not commented to this one yet. Maybe I saw it at FB? It looks familiar to me! It's an awesome little haiku, Kash. This one exudes hope! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/26/2012 4:37:00 PM
Hey hey kash, today I took the time to read your poem, Great poem I liked it! Have a great day, hug from me Laila
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Date: 11/25/2012 1:38:00 PM
Love how this comes full circle in the final line.. well don't my friend... Michael
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Date: 11/24/2012 3:07:00 PM the refreshing image and felling you Experience after prayer...pd
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Date: 11/24/2012 9:56:00 AM
wonderful and inspiring is this....
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Date: 11/24/2012 9:49:00 AM
Kash, excellent thoughts....David
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Date: 11/24/2012 9:09:00 AM
Yeah, Prayers always give new hope, nice!! Jag
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Date: 11/24/2012 9:04:00 AM
Written like a proverbial man, I love the insight you used within the write my friend! Quite the inspirational poem Kashi, I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this morning! What a fascinating poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/24/2012 6:59:00 AM
Your prayers is heard .... well written Haiku. - Have a relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/24/2012 6:55:00 AM
I hear that, nicely done Kash. Have a great day cory
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Date: 11/24/2012 6:42:00 AM
Very inspiring my friend! Cheers, Jack
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