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After My Prayer

every evening after my prayer--- the moon so new

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2013 5:03:00 PM

just here to say HELLO!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/11/2012 6:05:00 PM

Dee was right Kash VERY very nice!Time to start entering tthe verses in Frogpond conttests. Light & Love

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 12/10/2012 8:41:00 PM

Ahhhhhhhh, such a RIPE haiku. Oh I love this. Serious. Into my faves it goes. How did you do this? You have saturated 13 syllables with TIME yet retained the present tense, kept us focused on the now while drenching us both in the aspects of the past and the hope in the future. Oh, kash. This is truly rich. I must scope down to see if Debbie has seen this. Hugs, Cyndi

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/2/2012 7:05:00 AM

and glowing brighter too as I absorb this luminous Haiku Kash luv,,

Lillie Williams

Date: 11/30/2012 1:18:00 PM

Awesome read Kash. I like this very much!!!! :-)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/29/2012 11:34:00 AM

hiya, kashi.... love the tone of this 'ku.. endearing and wowie.. soupy!.:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2012 7:52:00 AM

I can't believe I have not commented to this one yet. Maybe I saw it at FB? It looks familiar to me! It's an awesome little haiku, Kash. This one exudes hope! Luv, Andrea

Laila Andresen Mjelde

Date: 11/26/2012 4:37:00 PM

Hey hey kash, today I took the time to read your poem, Great poem I liked it! Have a great day, hug from me Laila

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/25/2012 1:38:00 PM

Love how this comes full circle in the final line.. well don't my friend... Michael

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/24/2012 3:07:00 PM

Kash...love the refreshing image and felling you Experience after prayer...pd

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/24/2012 9:56:00 AM

wonderful and inspiring is this....

David Williams

Date: 11/24/2012 9:49:00 AM

Kash, excellent thoughts....David

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 11/24/2012 9:09:00 AM

Yeah, Prayers always give new hope, nice!! Jag

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/24/2012 9:04:00 AM

Written like a proverbial man, I love the insight you used within the write my friend! Quite the inspirational poem Kashi, I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this morning! What a fascinating poem, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/24/2012 6:59:00 AM

Your prayers is heard .... well written Haiku. - Have a relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Cory Long

Date: 11/24/2012 6:55:00 AM

I hear that, nicely done Kash. Have a great day cory

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/24/2012 6:42:00 AM

Very inspiring my friend! Cheers, Jack