After Forever

Red lips taste sweeter
Than the chapped skin
Of the mother of your children.
Perfectly coiled curls
And low-cut silk nighties
Slip easily through your fingers
While your wife changes a diaper
And sings your oldest to sleep
The same way she has since Dad left.
    He’s only six.
    The baby’s two.
        They’re old enough.
    Old enough for their father
    To leave them behind?
        Stop trying to guilt-trip me!
    I shouldn’t have to.
She still wears her ring,
Like some day you’ll change your mind
Or she’ll wake up from her nightmare.
    Daddy’s not coming.
    Daddy can’t make it.
    Daddy’s busy.
    It’s not your fault, baby. 
Your wife cares for the family
You let fall to pieces
Like the marriage you swore
Until death did you part.
    Not death.
    Until her.
       Don’t blame her for this.
After forever,
Your wife sends your children to school
And you watch them grow
Through your cell phone.
12/20/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Talbot Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 8:56 AM
Most apt, congratulations on your win! Wishing you all the best for 2018. Mick...
Krampe Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 9:08 PM
Great take on the theme, Carissa, congrats on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 7:54 PM
this is REALLY good, Carissa. You did my same take on the theme but so much better than How I did it!! Congrats for your well deserved win.
Gauthier Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 9:56 PM
Wow- powerful imagery! Congrats on your well deserved win, Carissa.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 9:42 PM
Back with Congratulations Carissa! I thought I smelled a winner: what John said :) Blessings xomo
Canerdy Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 9:24 PM
Excellent description, Carissa. Congrats on your well-deserved win! Janice
Talbot Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 8:05 PM
A very emotive piece, congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Mick
Rodrigues Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 6:45 PM
Oh wow! Congrats on your top win, Carissa!
Lawless Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 5:24 PM
OUCH!!! This one really pushed the limits of the theme....love it. The entire poem grabs the reader and the dagger to the heart.....that last line....OUCH!!! thanks for participating in the contest Carissa.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 10:24 PM
Oh wow. And that stinging last line! Fantastic pen for this contest, my best to you :)
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