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Aft-Play Nighttime Musing

AFT-PLAY - Nighttime Musing Listening - soft murmur of her breath gently moving silken strands draped across her face, Nuzzling - beauty’s aromatic aftermath adrift - on a sea of dreams. 12/6/2015 submitted to – Nighttime Musings – Poetry Contest sponsor – FJ Thomas

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Date: 1/3/2016 9:23:00 AM
Great write John.
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Date: 12/29/2015 6:04:00 PM
JOHN, Congratulations on your nice win. Enjoy the coming year..... SKAT
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Date: 12/29/2015 5:26:00 PM
Cool title and VERY cool poem. Congrats, John.
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Date: 12/29/2015 1:19:00 AM
Loved ur unique take on theme... perfectly done.. congrats on fine win John!
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John Lawless
Date: 12/29/2015 9:26:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Sharma for you support
Date: 12/28/2015 8:54:00 PM
Love the drifting intimacy of this. Congratulations on your win. SuZ
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John Lawless
Date: 12/29/2015 9:26:00 AM
Thank you Suzanne for taking the time to read and comment.
Date: 12/28/2015 8:08:00 PM
Congratulations on win with this beautiful poem.
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John Lawless
Date: 12/29/2015 9:25:00 AM
Thank you Susan
Date: 12/28/2015 7:28:00 PM
Lovely piece, John, well done. And all the best for 2016, Viv
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John Lawless
Date: 12/29/2015 9:25:00 AM
Thanks Viv....if the "fairies" don't bag ya....sneak up on the coming year.
Date: 12/28/2015 3:32:00 PM
congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem
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John Lawless
Date: 12/28/2015 3:39:00 PM
Thank you Frederic.
Date: 12/28/2015 2:47:00 PM
Musing ... in three beautiful steps, John! ~ Congratulations on a lovely and worthy win. ~ All the best. // paul
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John Lawless
Date: 12/28/2015 3:38:00 PM
Thanks Paul, always good to hear from you
Date: 12/28/2015 2:06:00 PM
Congratulations John on your win. I enjoyed the form and imagery.
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John Lawless
Date: 12/28/2015 3:37:00 PM
Thanks Robert,
Date: 12/28/2015 1:02:00 PM
John, congrats on your win :) Well deserved John! * smiles*
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John Lawless
Date: 12/28/2015 3:36:00 PM
Thanks Laura
Date: 12/7/2015 12:38:00 AM
Very lovely and loving - and touching. I admit I do not know what AFT means!??
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John Lawless
Date: 12/7/2015 8:52:00 PM
....it would be the other side of "foreplay"(a stretch of the nautical terms "fore and aft")
Date: 12/7/2015 12:07:00 AM
lovely write. SKAT
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Date: 12/6/2015 9:14:00 AM
very beautiful and sensual John:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 12/6/2015 9:33:00 AM
Thanks Jan,

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