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Aft-Play Nighttime Musing

AFT-PLAY  - Nighttime Musing


Listening -
soft murmur of her breath
gently moving silken strands
draped across her face,

Nuzzling -
beauty’s aromatic aftermath

adrift -
on a sea of dreams.



12/6/2015

submitted to – Nighttime Musings – Poetry Contest
sponsor – FJ Thomas

Copyright © John Lawless | Year Posted 2015

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James Inman Date: 1/3/2016 9:23:00 AM Great write John. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 12/29/2015 6:04:00 PM JOHN, Congratulations on your nice win. Enjoy the coming year..... SKAT Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/29/2015 5:26:00 PM Cool title and VERY cool poem. Congrats, John. Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 12/29/2015 1:19:00 AM Loved ur unique take on theme... perfectly done.. congrats on fine win John! Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 12/29/2015 9:26:00 AM Thank you Dr. Sharma for you support

Suzanne Delaney Date: 12/28/2015 8:54:00 PM Love the drifting intimacy of this. Congratulations on your win. SuZ Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 12/29/2015 9:26:00 AM Thank you Suzanne for taking the time to read and comment.

Susan Gentry Date: 12/28/2015 8:08:00 PM Congratulations on win with this beautiful poem. Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 12/29/2015 9:25:00 AM Thank you Susan

Viv Wigley Date: 12/28/2015 7:28:00 PM Lovely piece, John, well done. And all the best for 2016, Viv Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 12/29/2015 9:25:00 AM Thanks Viv....if the "fairies" don't bag ya....sneak up on the coming year.

Frederic Parker Date: 12/28/2015 3:32:00 PM congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 12/28/2015 3:39:00 PM Thank you Frederic.

Paul Callus Date: 12/28/2015 2:47:00 PM Musing ... in three beautiful steps, John! ~ Congratulations on a lovely and worthy win. ~ All the best. // paul Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 12/28/2015 3:38:00 PM Thanks Paul, always good to hear from you

Robert Stoner Jr Date: 12/28/2015 2:06:00 PM Congratulations John on your win. I enjoyed the form and imagery. Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 12/28/2015 3:37:00 PM Thanks Robert,

Beautiful Scars Date: 12/28/2015 1:02:00 PM John, congrats on your win :) Well deserved John! * smiles* Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 12/28/2015 3:36:00 PM Thanks Laura

CayCay Jennings Date: 12/7/2015 12:38:00 AM Very lovely and loving - and touching. I admit I do not know what AFT means!?? Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 12/7/2015 8:52:00 PM ....it would be the other side of "foreplay"(a stretch of the nautical terms "fore and aft")

Skat A Date: 12/7/2015 12:07:00 AM lovely write. SKAT Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 12/6/2015 9:14:00 AM very beautiful and sensual John:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 12/6/2015 9:33:00 AM Thanks Jan,