Afresh

Never were words
so quietly and powerfully
uttered with my
breath

than when I 
admitted that, 
yes,
I do indeed
love you

and I will follow
and lead
and tread lightly
and run hard

be both teacher and pupil

on this sojourn 
on earth with you.

We are now open to 
the promise
of a shared future
through sunrise 
and moonglow

moving with purpose
and fresh conviction
through the course of
all of our new days

there will always be
the thrill of our gaze

basking in the
pure lucidity of light
that illuminates
each other 
from
within.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 5/3/2009 1:45:00 PM
Shayna, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/27/2009 3:19:00 PM
Love the last stanza here and now this beautiful tribute to loving is a "first round survivor ... smile ... congratulations and good luck in the contest, Shayna !!
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Date: 4/10/2009 5:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals Shayna. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/5/2009 5:51:00 AM
Congratulations on being a finalist and having your poetry featured. Love Carol
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Date: 1/4/2009 5:29:00 PM
Great job, Shayna,! Well deserved poem to make it through to the finals!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/4/2009 6:39:00 AM
Congrats on being a featured finalist this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/30/2008 5:13:00 AM
Shayna - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/11/2008 9:00:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/1/2008 7:01:00 PM
Shayna - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 10/28/2008 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/20/2008 1:45:00 AM
Hi Shayna, Heartfelt poem. Very beautiful. congratulations on this well deerved feature of the week. Lainie
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Date: 8/18/2008 12:57:00 PM
Shayna - Beautiful poetry here - Congrats on having this wonderful poem featured
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Date: 8/18/2008 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations Shayna on having your poem featured! Nicole
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Date: 8/18/2008 10:18:00 AM
Congratulations Shayna on "Afresh" being featured again this month. Vince
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Date: 8/18/2008 5:41:00 AM
Congratulations Shayna on your beautiful poetry being featured once more. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/18/2008 4:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured once again this week Shayna. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2008 8:27:00 AM
Hi Shayna Congrats on this lovely poem being featured this week! I truly enjoyed the way you portrayed the feelings of love in this beautiful journey these two are on. Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 6/15/2008 2:16:00 PM
Hello~ Shayna congrats! on your featured poem. Afresh is a good write. B BLESS Crystal
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Date: 6/11/2008 7:01:00 AM
What a creative reflection on love! Congratulations on having you poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 6/10/2008 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations Shayna on "Afresh" being featured this week. Vince
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