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With jaundiced eye* affected by my heart I do pray for enlightened vision glow radiating truth of Scriptures’ rampart toward perspective against falsehood blow. Confessing personal biases’ blight with jaundiced eye affected by my heart I seek God’s pardon from arrogance-delight gripped by hypocrisy and conceit’s dart. Aware of preference right from the start I do admit own vested interest with jaundiced eye affected by my heart thus, trusting the Lord’s guidance is still best. Respecting others through Christ’s love in view my spirit reaches out for grace impart resolved never to wear empathy shoe with jaundiced eye affected by my heart.
*Psalm 88:9 Mine eye mourneth by reason of affliction: LORD, I have called daily upon thee, I have stretched out my hands unto thee. June 22, 2021 Edited on July 11, 2021 1st place, "A Brian Strand July 13" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 7/12/2021.

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Date: 7/18/2021 4:03:00 AM
Creative writing and as always your faith is presented with your work. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 7/12/2021 11:34:00 PM
Respecting others through Christ’s love in view my spirit reaches out for grace impart resolved never to wear empathy shoe with jaundiced eye affected by my heart. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/29/2021 1:46:00 AM
Beautiful way of looking at it, Beata, yeah, we all truly need God's guidance in this life:)
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Date: 6/23/2021 12:47:00 AM
This is amazing, written so passionately and articulated so well! The scripture perfectly solidifies our ever reaching out for His healing and deliverance. Simply beautiful Beata! <3
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Date: 6/22/2021 4:22:00 AM
Wonderful write! Really liked how you put a perfect qoute from scriptures at the bottom. All the best for contest. Have a wonderful day ahead friend.
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