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Affection With Rapt

Enthralled am I in my deep mind, a love like yours, so hard to find- I’ve relinquished all that sad woe, once I found it hard to let go, but those days are so far behind. Immersed in your strength I’m confined we’re beauty and passion combined, spellbound with magic, we shall grow- Enthralled am I. Absorbed with spirit I’m inclined engaged in desire, we’re entwined- So fascinated, this I know, with affection our love shall glow, so in love, you’re one of a kind- Enthralled am I. July 2, 2017 For the contest, Form R Sponsor, Broken Wings

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Date: 7/31/2017 8:24:00 PM
Hi Laura, I love the rondeau form and your poem is superb and romantic, perfect! Congratulations :)
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Date: 7/17/2017 4:13:00 PM
this is lovely , Laura. Congrats in the contest. Not many chose the Rapt word. We are the romantics!
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Date: 7/16/2017 2:06:00 AM
I like this lots. Congratulations, Kai
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Date: 7/6/2017 9:37:00 AM
This is beautiful, Luloo:) you have indeed found true love:)
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Date: 7/2/2017 11:21:00 PM
This is simply gorgeous, Laura. The form really sells the emotion. Splendid poetry:) Good luck, sweetie!
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Date: 7/2/2017 1:46:00 PM
Exceptional job, Laura! This must have taken some time! A winning entry in my eyes! Best of luck to you
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