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Aerial Dancers

As butterflies eagerly flutter into view Our senses unfurl with alluring sights Engaging while imparting those ornate designs Under skies azure, they entice, delight Igniting then occupying thoughts upbeat then all senses erupt with invitations that ordain spring's ultimate, bright allure Yet every day invokes thoughts of sweet, unique, yet amazing things Enriching then initiating thoughts oh so upbeat Like aerial dancers entreating with invitations that offer hope Until they are joined eventually by insect throngs of many unbelievable colors As butterflies entice with invigorating dances outstanding movements under sun's assuring glow Enraptured by intimate tunes of warblers upholding melodious appealing flow Every butterfly imparts beauty Only monarchs ultimately rule, adorable royalty Enjoy the inherent beauty of the universe

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Date: 9/20/2013 9:52:00 PM
Hi Joseph, , congrats on your winning poem *** Always & Forever ***LINDA
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Date: 9/20/2013 4:00:00 PM
Joseph, love the winning poem.......SKAT
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Date: 9/20/2013 6:31:00 AM
WOW. This is truly remarkable. You captured the symbolism of the butterfly perfectly .. Congrats on your well deserved win :)
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Date: 9/16/2013 7:09:00 PM
YOu did an amazing job in that difficult challenge. BIG congrats to you.
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Date: 9/16/2013 9:30:00 AM
So lovely is this entry! Well deserving, and who would know that it had to meet David's challenge......it reads so naturally !!
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Date: 9/15/2013 6:24:00 PM
beautifully written Joseph, congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/15/2013 12:31:00 PM
Hi Joseph another fine win for you , well done xx
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Date: 3/24/2013 10:56:00 PM
I had to choose this one to read Joseph...the title made me think of butterflies and sure enough, that's what you'd written about! The Monarch...one of my favorite creatures, ever! Thanks for sharing and for the visit, Joseph. Love, Annalise
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Date: 3/15/2013 4:02:00 AM
liked it :)
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Date: 3/14/2013 11:56:00 PM
I sure do love those aerial dancers, joseph!
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Date: 3/12/2013 8:51:00 PM
Great Joseph ..Seren
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Date: 3/12/2013 3:34:00 PM
Your poem paints so many enchanting pictures. It's good to hear the spring birds outside for now.
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Date: 3/11/2013 6:05:00 PM
Life's umbrella...I like that...nice poem...Donna
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Date: 3/11/2013 9:49:00 PM
thank you Donna..its a work in progress....may have to change that line

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