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Advice From a Wise Bird

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** The next time you're near an electric wall plug. My advice to you is, "DON'T BE SO SMUG!"

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Robert Gorelick

Date: 2/12/2022 12:26:00 PM

Your poem is simply electric! The bird seems quite sagacious...Happy Day!

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/12/2022 12:53:00 PM

Thanks Robert for your comment. Happy you enjoyed the poem. I hope the kids will see some wisdom in her words. Blessings ~ Debra

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/10/2022 6:42:00 AM

His feathers look a little ruffled I must admit, and the birdie still looks quite stunned! Had to learn the hard way, such a shame, a perfect couplet you have creatively crafted. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/11/2022 3:26:00 PM

Thanks Jennifer, I enjoyed your comment. Thanks for taking the time to read the poem. Enjoy your weekend . Hugs & Blessings ~ Debra

Anil Deo

Date: 2/9/2022 9:59:00 PM

I won't: avoiding all hot places and destinations, in Jesus's name. Amen

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/11/2022 3:19:00 PM

Hi! Anil, Always a pleasure when you stop by and comment. Prayers & Blessings ~ Debra

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/9/2022 7:46:00 PM

Poor birdie!

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/11/2022 3:17:00 PM

"Once bitten twice shy". (LoL) Thanks Kim I enjoyed your comment. Hugs ~ Debra

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/8/2022 12:51:00 PM

Oh my, you hit the nail on the head with this one!

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/8/2022 3:24:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by to read the poem and for your lovely comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/7/2022 4:54:00 PM

Many birds get electrocuted by sitting on a live wire. Lvely observation.

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/8/2022 9:52:00 AM

Thank you Victory for your comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Anil Deo

Date: 2/7/2022 12:59:00 PM

Did it happen to the poor bird, or to a human close to you, LOL! DEAR Mrs Brown my sister in Christ, I love your write Ng, & your visits. Peace of Jesus

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/7/2022 1:24:00 PM

I'm happy the poem put a smile on your face. Thanks stopping by always happy to talk to you. Blessing & Prayers ~ Debra

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/7/2022 11:07:00 AM

Indeed, looks like she knows what she is talking about -- Very nice! Joe.

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/7/2022 1:19:00 PM

Thanks for your comment Joe. Let's hope she takes her own advice. Blessings ~ Debra

Valsa George

Date: 2/6/2022 10:50:00 PM

This is cute.... ! From her look, I think she has learned this hard lesson in life through experience.....

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/7/2022 1:15:00 PM

I'm happy you enjoyed the poem. The wise bird came from the "School of Hard Knocks." LoL. Thanks Vasla for your comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/6/2022 8:34:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! ~ E. Lech Tro(Cute)

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/6/2022 8:54:00 PM

She had to learn the hard way. (LOL) Thanks for your comment. Blessings, ~ Debra