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Advice From a Wise Bird

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                            The next time you're near an electric wall plug.
                              My advice to you is, "DON'T BE SO SMUG!"

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Robert Gorelick

February 12, 2022 at 12:26 PM

Your poem is simply electric! The bird seems quite sagacious...Happy Day!

Debra L Brown

February 12, 2022 at 12:53 PM

Thanks Robert for your comment. Happy you enjoyed the poem. I hope the kids will see some wisdom in her words. Blessings ~ Debra

Jennifer Proxenos

February 10, 2022 at 6:42 AM

His feathers look a little ruffled I must admit, and the birdie still looks quite stunned! Had to learn the hard way, such a shame, a perfect couplet you have creatively crafted. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Debra L Brown

February 11, 2022 at 3:26 PM

Thanks Jennifer, I enjoyed your comment. Thanks for taking the time to read the poem. Enjoy your weekend . Hugs & Blessings ~ Debra

Anil Deo

February 9, 2022 at 9:59 PM

I won't: avoiding all hot places and destinations, in Jesus's name. Amen

Debra L Brown

February 11, 2022 at 3:19 PM

Hi! Anil, Always a pleasure when you stop by and comment. Prayers & Blessings ~ Debra

Kim Rodrigues

February 9, 2022 at 7:46 PM

Poor birdie!

Debra L Brown

February 11, 2022 at 3:17 PM

"Once bitten twice shy". (LoL) Thanks Kim I enjoyed your comment. Hugs ~ Debra

M. L. Kiser

February 8, 2022 at 12:51 PM

Oh my, you hit the nail on the head with this one!

Debra L Brown

February 8, 2022 at 3:24 PM

Thank you for stopping by to read the poem and for your lovely comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Victor Buhagiar

February 7, 2022 at 4:54 PM

Many birds get electrocuted by sitting on a live wire. Lvely observation.

Debra L Brown

February 8, 2022 at 9:52 AM

Thank you Victory for your comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Anil Deo

February 7, 2022 at 12:59 PM

Did it happen to the poor bird, or to a human close to you, LOL! DEAR Mrs Brown my sister in Christ, I love your write Ng, & your visits. Peace of Jesus

Debra L Brown

February 7, 2022 at 1:24 PM

I'm happy the poem put a smile on your face. Thanks stopping by always happy to talk to you. Blessing & Prayers ~ Debra