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Advice Adviser

I'm retired but do I still have a life Yes, sexual adviser I am to my wife But if I say try this It'll be totally bliss If I desire I'll ask for your advice . Challenged to write on the back of a Joke!

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/20/2015 6:27:00 AM

Huge one, the first line is a good line for line but with so much on it and so with the fifth line.... :)! clever and funny!!! (((hugs awith squeezes)))~olive eloisa

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/21/2015 10:51:00 AM

make one too from one of my jokes :o

James Fraser
Date: 4/20/2015 1:24:00 PM

I love the challenge of turning a joke into a Limerick, makes good fun, and hopefully for good reading. Hugs, cuddles to warm huggles//Dino James xxxx

James Peranteau

Date: 4/16/2015 10:19:00 PM

Ya know dear poet; me thinks there's a bit of sarcasim riddled in this humorous write of yours, so craftly done I might add ! It may just be me, but, anywho, a great write my friend ! I must peek in on one that caught my eye, so stay a weee bit awake for me to drop a comment, which I'm sure will come.....everytime I read one of your writes, I can't help but remark ! LOts O love bro.....

James Fraser
Date: 4/18/2015 10:48:00 AM

Afternoon James, yes indeed there's a seam of sarcasm ;-) a little does the world of good, especially in a Limerick. Blessed Saturday to you and Noah, smiles, James :) :)

Tim Smith

Date: 4/16/2015 8:10:00 PM

Lol...a nice retirement

James Fraser
Date: 4/18/2015 10:40:00 AM

Indeed Tim, let's hope I reach it. Happy Saturday to you, James :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/16/2015 3:57:00 PM

very clever humour James:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 4/18/2015 10:22:00 AM

I love these little challenges from work trying to create a Limerick from a joke. Happy Saturday to you Jan, hugs xxx