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Advice Adviser


I'm retired but do I still have a life
Yes, sexual adviser I am to my wife
But if I say try this
It'll be totally bliss
If I desire I'll ask for your advice




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Challenged to write on the back of a Joke!

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

April 20, 2015 at 6:27 AM

Huge one, the first line is a good line for line but with so much on it and so with the fifth line.... :)! clever and funny!!! (((hugs awith squeezes)))~olive eloisa

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

April 21, 2015 at 10:51 AM

make one too from one of my jokes :o

James Fraser

April 20, 2015 at 1:24 PM

I love the challenge of turning a joke into a Limerick, makes good fun, and hopefully for good reading. Hugs, cuddles to warm huggles//Dino James xxxx

James Peranteau

April 16, 2015 at 10:19 PM

Ya know dear poet; me thinks there's a bit of sarcasim riddled in this humorous write of yours, so craftly done I might add ! It may just be me, but, anywho, a great write my friend ! I must peek in on one that caught my eye, so stay a weee bit awake for me to drop a comment, which I'm sure will come.....everytime I read one of your writes, I can't help but remark ! LOts O love bro.....

James Fraser

April 18, 2015 at 10:48 AM

Afternoon James, yes indeed there's a seam of sarcasm ;-) a little does the world of good, especially in a Limerick. Blessed Saturday to you and Noah, smiles, James :) :)