Adventures of the Little Red Ribbon

A cold, cold autumn wind,
Tickles my edges to the frills.
Making me wave to the people,
And starts to give me the chills.

Now a stronger gust,
Lifts my silken body free.
My shiny red skin shimmers,
For all the world to see.

Soaring like an eagle,
Two wings flapping bold.
Gliding past a homeless man,
Who tries to bear the cold.

Whizzing by a baker’s window,
Scents of pastries so yummy.
Glazed delights all so tasty,
Oh I wish I had a tummy.

Well, I suppose it’s best,
No watching calories or fat.
No diets and no exercise,
Well, what do you think of that?

Flying high with no care,
And free with utter delight.
Floating about until dusk,
That soon shall turn to night.

Few leaves play with me,
Falling from nearby trees.
Racing past me quickly,
Riding the autumn breeze.

My red serpent tail,
Rattles like a song.
Descending to pavement below,
And starts to slither along.

As I creep on by,
Hunting no prey at all.
Slipping down a storm drain,
Floating with the fall.

Tunnels with brown water,
Lead to a murky lake.
Silt crowds around me,
No fish here for Heaven’s sake.

Out here in this lake,
As one fisherman sits.
He nibbles on peaches,
And spits out the pits.

He carries at his side,
All that he holds dear.
A lonely soul he was,
Fishing this time of year.

He snags on my end,
And reels me to his side.
I curl up into a bow,
There is no reason to hide.

He smiles down at me,
And I gleam back too.
He places me in his pocket,
Knowing just what to do.

A few hours later,
He brings me back out.
To show to his daughter,
Who now begins to shout.

Her happy little grin,
A cheerful girlish giggle.
She waves me about,
Making me wiggle.

She shows me her dolly,
With old muddy hair.
And places me in it,
For me to take care.

I will make her pretty,
My red silk does shine.
This is where I’m happy,
I knew so all the time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Lacey Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 4:13 PM
touching and funny - congrats on passing first round!
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September 26, 2009 at 10:43 AM
Chris, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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September 25, 2009 at 12:19 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 24, 2009 at 5:28 PM
VERY CREATIVE! Best wishes through to the next round, cHRIS Lainie
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September 24, 2009 at 4:19 PM
nicely penned, congratulations on the poem being featured.
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September 24, 2009 at 1:59 PM
Chris, Congratulations on getting through the first round of the poetry contest with your great verse! Luck and love, Carolyn
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September 24, 2009 at 1:43 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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September 24, 2009 at 9:52 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round .Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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March 12, 2009 at 11:56 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week.GB Tyesha
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March 12, 2009 at 4:58 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Peace Fathima
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March 11, 2009 at 2:54 PM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Chris. Love, Carol
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March 11, 2009 at 10:35 AM
ongratulations Chris on your poem being featured on Poetry Soup this week. Vince
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March 10, 2009 at 3:27 PM
wonderfully written......congrats on this great poem being featured this week!..MJ*
Mason Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 5:35 PM
Wonderful story ... very clever with great imagery!! This is an awesome choice to be a favorite this week here at the soup. Congratulations, Chris!!
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March 9, 2009 at 12:13 PM
Chris - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Very well deserved. Peace always, John
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March 9, 2009 at 6:46 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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March 8, 2009 at 5:27 PM
Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
Jordan Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 5:20 PM
Chris that was quite the journey - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
Ginn Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 6:43 PM
What an adventure. Its funny to look at things and think who has touched it where it's been, what they thought of it. Made me smile Chris.
Ash Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 3:47 PM
I'm from a hillbilly little town outside St. Louis, Missouri. Thank you for the comment :) I will be posting more of works as I get them off my back up drives.
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