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Adultery- the Pain

Is life fair? It seems like no-one cares How far would you go? For the things you love so? We had love for each other I became a mother We said till death do us part Did I misunderstand, am I not smart? You said she was nothing to you But when she enters the room, we became two What went wrong? Wasn’t our love strong? I blame her for everything, especially the sorrow Because of her there is no tomorrow God must forgive me for what I’m gonna do But if I cannot have you, she will never have you too

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Skat A

Date: 6/10/2013 8:17:00 PM

Hi shanon, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2013 9:34:00 PM

Hello Shanon, sometimes we are pushed to the limit, and we only react to others action. I like your couplet poem... Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda

Shanon Jacobs
Date: 6/10/2013 7:59:00 AM

Hi Linda, thank you, I will do just that.....love the drama and love theme, lol! I will fit right in. You want new poems on your contest or these ones? Thanks for the warm WELCOME, much appreciated and i will be writing up a storm.... keep well and chat soon, soon:)

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 6/9/2013 9:54:00 AM

Very forlorn words you painted here Shanon but a common reality that no doubt many can relate to.A sublime write friend.

Shanon Jacobs
Date: 6/10/2013 8:00:00 AM

Thank You, Shanon taking abow:)

Kim Van Breda

Date: 6/9/2013 9:30:00 AM

They say.. "There is none so angry as a woman scorned". Great poem on such a common, sad occurrence of modern society

Shanon Jacobs
Date: 6/10/2013 8:00:00 AM

Thanx Kim, much appreciated!