Adoption

I have two daughters
Each beautiful and smart
One born from my loins
And one born from my heart.

My biological offspring
I call "mini-me"
My eyes, my temper,
My need to be free.

The day she was born
My life felt renewed
By this chubby, sweet cherub
White, raven-haired, nude.

I "get" how she thinks
I know how she feels
I know how to fix it
So each broken part heals.

Five years flew by
And like the kick of a fetus
My heart sack swelled
For a child to need us.

And so my next girl
Came forth from my love
A four-year-old beauty
Sent down from above.

No copy of me
This brown, wondrous child!
Her questions so fierce,
Imagination so wild!

I wondered at first
How much feeling could bloom
For a child who came
From another mom's womb.

But soon I would realize
Like her sister before her
I would do anything to
Protect and adore her.

So proudly I brag of
Girls born worlds apart:
One born of my womb
And one born of my heart!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Aldana Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 4:42 PM
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Rockwell Avatar
December 5, 2025 at 3:09 PM
I’m sorry but I just found your comments on my poetry. Thank you SO much for all your positive, encouraging comments! You really lifted my spirits!!! I will go read your poetry now!!! Cindi
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June 15, 2015 at 2:38 PM
Hi Cindi, I have been enjoying your well crafted poetry. I liked your "Cloud" creation and "There is a God" poem. This poem about Adoption shows your virtuous and pure spirit nicely. Keep up the good work. You have talent. Have a great day. Take care. Earl
Leiser Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 6:15 PM
Very beautiful poem, Cindi, and with a great message too! Thanks for sharing :)
A  Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 10:25 PM
Wow, you are beautiful in and out. ADOPTION, saves lives.... I praise your poem .... Blessing to you and the little ones
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