Andrea Dietrich Poet ABC

Adonis of My Dreams

Adonis of my dreams, you never fade.
Beautiful, how beautiful you are.
Caresses in the night; the loving made. . .
Dreams are these I wished upon a star.
Ever more, I’ll hold the vision of
Your angel face - for me the face of love.

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Darren White December 14, 2016 at 2:46 AM Love it, your Adonis :) Congratulations!

Constance La France December 13, 2016 at 1:54 PM Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely ABC poem, I really like it ~

Casarah Nance July 26, 2014 at 12:14 PM Ooh pretty :) You've got the words that make hearts swoon :)

Phyllis Babcock June 12, 2013 at 9:49 PM This is beautiful Andrea. An awesome write my friend. love phyl

Poet Destroyer A June 10, 2013 at 9:50 AM Andrea, A late congratulations on Alfred's ABC of love contest... very lovely... Love * Linda

Daver Austin June 5, 2013 at 10:08 AM Is his name Eduardo? Love, daver Andrea Dietrich June 5, 2013 at 7:46 PM oh no, this one's name is Guy Loranger of French Quebec. I would love to know what became of him.

Carrie Richards June 3, 2013 at 1:14 PM There is always a sense of mystery behind the man Adonis, of which you speak.....something sad telling of lost love. This is beautiful as always!

Seosamh De Burca May 30, 2013 at 6:33 PM Nicely done. I have enjoyed reading a number of your poem today, love the variety and variation of your work.

Joe Maverick May 28, 2013 at 2:49 PM I can almost see this paragon you describe so well Andrea wishing you all the best with this glowing piece

Robert Johnson May 26, 2013 at 3:10 PM And the dream lives on. Venus, Oh Venus, Oh never mind.

Timothy Hicks May 26, 2013 at 1:09 AM soup mail

Debbie Duncan May 25, 2013 at 11:57 PM Oh I like this Andrea,,,, watched Magic Mike Channing Tatum, McConaughey today, My Soul Sucker poem was a poetry challenge ;}

Eileen Manassian May 25, 2013 at 3:07 AM An angelic quality this exudes...lovely, Andrea

Matthew Anish May 24, 2013 at 10:47 PM Nice fantasy - beautifully expressed! I really like the two books you have sent me - I intend to read them - cover to cover! Tomorrow I am going to the Poetry Forum to read from my work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jack Horne May 24, 2013 at 2:29 PM love this romantic gem, my friend. Thanks again - great contest : )

Bl Devnath May 24, 2013 at 1:30 PM Excellent expression with glittering words of gems like. Good luck in the contest. Thanks.....,loved always, bl

Kash Poet May 24, 2013 at 12:04 PM GOOD one.Repeating the word BEAUTIFUL makes the 2nd line more appealing!Loved this Andrea.

Harry Horsman May 24, 2013 at 10:42 AM wow just glad to get back to your wonderful poetry Andrea, not reading it, is the downside to my absents

Richard Lamoureux May 24, 2013 at 7:24 AM This has a dream like quality Andrea. Well done!

Russell Sivey May 24, 2013 at 5:25 AM You have written another masterful write my friend, an awesome compilation of glorious words! I truly enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! Your image you have painted is purely remarkable! What a magnificent piece, Great Work!!

Charmaine Chircop May 24, 2013 at 1:37 AM You ate so romantic sweet friend..Visiting some of your poetry as Christie sleeps. Charmaine Chircop May 24, 2013 at 1:38 AM Are not ate i meant..:)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 24, 2013 at 12:48 AM ha good luck to you and your Adonis, I don't even have a teddy bear, excellent xx

Timothy Hicks May 24, 2013 at 12:13 AM Short and sweet, but for sure not lacking elegance. Curious to see how you'll fare in the contest...

Robert Pettit May 23, 2013 at 11:11 PM Sweetly written as usual.