Adolescent Stems

Late mid-life street woman she is... I grew up with her under mango trees now softly drooping their shoulders much like hers.. but she, still shaped like a Boticelli urn, wrapped in arms diaphanous in flesh and heat, fanned banana leaves swaying to latin notes while cooking fried bamboo shoots, her fragrance buzzing along summer's exotic fly: how she pinched my cheek with her tapered fingers still wrinkled pink in grasses floating on her quivering body.. . somehow, she gave me this epiphany of riding with my own instinct, the slow wave of breaths gently drifting through a young rosiness of my adolescent stems... if i knew how to swirl in the wakening glides of inner flow , it was her circling baked hips winding and bellying in nights and morns of her own natural sashays... How i long to climb her mango tree, her waxing then waning shape still blazing among plucked banana leaves of female revelry or finery… I tell myself, there is no age when her contour sways in places where her eyes dazzle with her near floating, tanning limbs, of how she made me feel unashamed being just who I am without much caution or youthful pride; humbled so by her inherent moon-full grace… © ... .............. Skat's Contest---Any Old Poem #4
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Lawless Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 6:07 PM
Nette, you wove this tapestry of words around the titled phrase "slow wave of breaths gently drifting through a young rosiness of my adolescent stems", a fulcrum of fantasy...Congrats on the win
A  Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 2:57 PM
Nette, Congratulations, that is all :-) **SKAT WAS HERE**
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 10:03 PM
Nette, I just love your story telling ability, wonderful job. Congrats on making Debbie's winners' list................S.Ronthorpe - "Sam I Am"
Sweetheart Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 8:33 PM
congrats Nette luv on a terrific win for this magnifico write ..how do u keep topping yourself with words??? so amazing is this piece..luv..
Beck Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 2:05 PM
a real sexy piece (steamy) and some interesting and nice word combos such as "fanned banana" and "rapid pride" ..... ( i could go on at length) congrats to you Young N.....by the way if you re wondering about where I am, i am a whopping 5.3 cm north of you hahaha
Brown Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 11:07 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Debbie Guzzi's~ "Transformation" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Devnath  Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 8:41 AM
Here, I smell the Natural love with full of heart. Awesome and very deeply penned, loved your transformation, loved and enjoyed, bl
Kendrick Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 4:34 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work..I get the feeling that this person was someone very close to you..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commeinting on my work..This is one of the best ones that you have written..Sara
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 1:45 PM
Enchantment at its apex! A poem of brilliant thought conveyed with the hand of a master poet. Very impressive indeed! Into my favorites.
Austin Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 11:16 AM
A true South Sea temptress. Gauguin might make a painting out of this one. Love, daver
Poet Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 11:07 AM
This is really mesmerizing Nette.Wonderful use of metaphors here.This must be for coming of age contest.Best wishes.
Campi Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 10:57 AM
I printed this out, so that i may read it several times. you have many interesting images in this poem. Thank you for your comment on my poem "on an evening walk" it is well appreciated, Jancarl
Rhinem Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 10:33 AM
Smile ˜ She Seems & Sounds Very Beautiful Both Inside As Well As Out ˜ My Dear Supremely Gifted & Amazingly Beautiful Nette Oncloud ˜ Truly One Of The Most Fascinating Poets & Poetess' My Blessed Eyes Have Ever Beheld * I Believe If One Follows The Sincerity Of Their Hearts Then Yessss, There Would Be Nothing To Be Ashamed Of Unless One Day There Eyes Were To Be Perhaps Opened Unto Another View & Perspective & Even Then, What Was Has Since Washed Away & Today Marks A Brand New Day & Love Amid PURITY Never Fails * Gazing Beyound The Gray To Find The Blue ˜ My Love to You, Forever&Always, John!:) ˜
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