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Admire the Beautiful Sunset

 “Sunsets are nature's way of soothing your soul and gladdening your heart.”  author unknown.

How can anyone not admire a scintillating theme
Of the golden, graceful sun now descending,
Behind the darkening horizon, a delightful dream.

     It is an amazing allure to watch the panoramic set,
     The wonder as I swim beneath the waves
     A sight that illuminates the wonder of sunset.

But night has now fallen, the sun has gone to its rest.
The sea is cool, I trudge to the sandy beach only to hear
The nightingales’ symphonies. Isn't creation blessed?


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Susan Ashley Date: 5/24/2025 7:48:00 AM Dear Victor, the vibrance of your imagery captures the beautiful essence of sunset with poetic allure and heartfelt appreciation. Indeed, creation is blessed. Congratulations for your excellent contest placement! Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Smita Kulkarni Date: 5/16/2025 11:19:00 AM Such beautiful poetry, Victor! Sunset skies are truly unique, offering endless lessons when you sit with them in quiet reflection. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. -Smita Login to Reply

Beryl Edmonds Date: 5/8/2025 1:18:00 AM Dear Victor, who could not admire the beautiful sunset, or your beautiful lines. Back to congratulate you on your win in Constance’s contest… Beryl Login to Reply

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 4/9/2025 6:11:00 AM So nice on so many levels Victor. The image created by swimming beneath the waves at sunset is enthralling. Congratulations! :) Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/7/2025 12:09:00 PM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story again. Have a blessed day with your win................... Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/7/2025 12:09:00 PM - Back with a congratulation, Victor :) - hugs Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/7/2025 9:54:00 AM Congrats, Victor! Login to Reply

Unseeking Seeker Date: 4/7/2025 8:36:00 AM Lovely poem, Victor ~ congratulations on your top win Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 4/7/2025 7:51:00 AM Victor, your poem evokes a distinct sense of sweetness, nuanced feelings, and great imagery. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/6/2025 11:22:00 AM What a stylist gorgeous way to do the contest. Love this. Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/4/2025 12:02:00 PM I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story. What a beautiful picture. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful weekend writing away.......... Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/4/2025 10:34:00 AM Indeed beautiful…the lines seem to swim. Login to Reply

Maria Williams Date: 4/3/2025 6:06:00 AM Dear Victor,this is absolutely beautiful! ? The way you capture the sun’s descent and the sea’s tranquility feels so peaceful and poetic. I love how the sunset transitions into the night, with the nightingales’ symphony adding the perfect final touch. A truly mesmerizing tribute to nature’s beauty!...Hugs Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 4/3/2025 2:46:00 AM As a sunset chaser! I absolutely love this poem! Your pen bleeds such soothing magic lately and this is no exception it is beyond stunning and the flow is seamless! I love especially “But night has now fallen, the sun has gone to its rest. The sea is cool, I trudge to the sandy beach only to hear The nightingales’ symphonies. Isn't creation blessed?” Exactly how i feel after every sunset altho we dont hear nightingales! Weve been gettin really golden sunsets lately! Another exquisite write!BOL Login to Reply

CayCay Jennings Date: 4/2/2025 4:50:00 PM Are you still drinking, or just finishing the same glass? Victor, hmmm??? And then there's your name this way: Victor! You did it, you wrote nine lines of absolutely beautiful poetry, with the perfect clinching-end question. I KNOW this will fare they well in the contest. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 4/2/2025 10:11:00 AM Very nicely penned Victor Login to Reply

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 4/1/2025 2:36:00 PM Ooooohhh, lovely! Wonderful writing and rhyming, Victor. The picture is awesome, too. :) Login to Reply

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh Date: 4/1/2025 9:13:00 AM Life so enjoyable with the beauty of nature.So nicely penned.Wish you the best. Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 4/1/2025 8:32:00 AM A beautiful sunset is indeed a feast to the eye. It is a joy watching the sky changing colors. After watching the sunset , people generally walk to the beach. A lovely poem dear Victor. All the Best! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/1/2025 5:23:00 AM Ahh!! So delightful. This one reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K Login to Reply

Michael Tor Date: 4/1/2025 12:27:00 AM Such a beautiful poem Victor so glad I came by to read it. Capturing the sun rising is awesome. God bless you my friend... Login to Reply

Karen Jones Date: 3/31/2025 11:15:00 PM Beautiful and vivid! Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/31/2025 7:26:00 PM The wonder as I swim beneath the waves…A sight that illuminates the wonder of sunset... Very nice, my friend! Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 3/31/2025 2:44:00 PM Victor, a beautiful poem, best of luck in the contest. - hugs Login to Reply

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/31/2025 11:57:00 AM Hello Victor, the sunsets are beautiful. I enjoyed them more over a lake or river any body body of water. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/ Login to Reply

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