Victor Buhagiar Poet Rhyme

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Write Nine Beautiful Lines (With A Twist) Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Admire the Beautiful Sunset

 “Sunsets are nature's way of soothing your soul and gladdening your heart.”  author unknown.

How can anyone not admire a scintillating theme
Of the golden, graceful sun now descending,
Behind the darkening horizon, a delightful dream.

     It is an amazing allure to watch the panoramic set,
     The wonder as I swim beneath the waves
     A sight that illuminates the wonder of sunset.

But night has now fallen, the sun has gone to its rest.
The sea is cool, I trudge to the sandy beach only to hear
The nightingales’ symphonies. Isn't creation blessed?


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Susan Ashley May 24, 2025 at 7:48 AM Dear Victor, the vibrance of your imagery captures the beautiful essence of sunset with poetic allure and heartfelt appreciation. Indeed, creation is blessed. Congratulations for your excellent contest placement! Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan

Smita Kulkarni May 16, 2025 at 11:19 AM Such beautiful poetry, Victor! Sunset skies are truly unique, offering endless lessons when you sit with them in quiet reflection. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. -Smita

Beryl Edmonds May 8, 2025 at 1:18 AM Dear Victor, who could not admire the beautiful sunset, or your beautiful lines. Back to congratulate you on your win in Constance’s contest… Beryl

Linda Alice Fowler April 9, 2025 at 6:11 AM So nice on so many levels Victor. The image created by swimming beneath the waves at sunset is enthralling. Congratulations! :)

Paula Goldsmith April 7, 2025 at 12:09 PM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story again. Have a blessed day with your win...................

Anne-Lise Andresen April 7, 2025 at 12:09 PM - Back with a congratulation, Victor :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues April 7, 2025 at 9:54 AM Congrats, Victor!

Unseeking Seeker April 7, 2025 at 8:36 AM Lovely poem, Victor ~ congratulations on your top win

Sotto Poet April 7, 2025 at 7:51 AM Victor, your poem evokes a distinct sense of sweetness, nuanced feelings, and great imagery. Congratulations on your well-deserved win.

Andrea Dietrich April 6, 2025 at 11:22 AM What a stylist gorgeous way to do the contest. Love this.

Paula Goldsmith April 4, 2025 at 12:02 PM I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story. What a beautiful picture. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful weekend writing away..........

Kim Rodrigues April 4, 2025 at 10:34 AM Indeed beautiful…the lines seem to swim.

Maria Williams April 3, 2025 at 6:06 AM Dear Victor,this is absolutely beautiful! ? The way you capture the sun’s descent and the sea’s tranquility feels so peaceful and poetic. I love how the sunset transitions into the night, with the nightingales’ symphony adding the perfect final touch. A truly mesmerizing tribute to nature’s beauty!...Hugs

Ink Empress April 3, 2025 at 2:46 AM As a sunset chaser! I absolutely love this poem! Your pen bleeds such soothing magic lately and this is no exception it is beyond stunning and the flow is seamless! I love especially “But night has now fallen, the sun has gone to its rest. The sea is cool, I trudge to the sandy beach only to hear The nightingales’ symphonies. Isn't creation blessed?” Exactly how i feel after every sunset altho we dont hear nightingales! Weve been gettin really golden sunsets lately! Another exquisite write!BOL

CayCay Godwin April 2, 2025 at 4:50 PM Are you still drinking, or just finishing the same glass? Victor, hmmm??? And then there's your name this way: Victor! You did it, you wrote nine lines of absolutely beautiful poetry, with the perfect clinching-end question. I KNOW this will fare they well in the contest. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Joseph May April 2, 2025 at 10:11 AM Very nicely penned Victor

Evelyn Judy Buehler April 1, 2025 at 2:36 PM Ooooohhh, lovely! Wonderful writing and rhyming, Victor. The picture is awesome, too. :)

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh April 1, 2025 at 9:13 AM Life so enjoyable with the beauty of nature.So nicely penned.Wish you the best.

Valsa George April 1, 2025 at 8:32 AM A beautiful sunset is indeed a feast to the eye. It is a joy watching the sky changing colors. After watching the sunset , people generally walk to the beach. A lovely poem dear Victor. All the Best!

Sara Kendrick April 1, 2025 at 5:23 AM Ahh!! So delightful. This one reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K

Michael Tor April 1, 2025 at 12:27 AM Such a beautiful poem Victor so glad I came by to read it. Capturing the sun rising is awesome. God bless you my friend...

Karen Jones March 31, 2025 at 11:15 PM Beautiful and vivid!

Kim Rodrigues March 31, 2025 at 7:26 PM The wonder as I swim beneath the waves…A sight that illuminates the wonder of sunset... Very nice, my friend!

Tania Kitchin March 31, 2025 at 2:44 PM Victor, a beautiful poem, best of luck in the contest. - hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu March 31, 2025 at 11:57 AM Hello Victor, the sunsets are beautiful. I enjoyed them more over a lake or river any body body of water. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

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