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Adieu

Adieu Charm and flavor of seven heavens flashed on the single sentence voiced by you. One moment of hesitance brought a pause on eternal time and hence our life sensed amorous fragrance, touching elegance. Bubbling blood flooded in romance. But thunder struck, I watched my beloved to depart in silence. Yet I forgive and live on sweet remembrance of bygone days in somber solitude, enclosed by thorny fence of tolerance. 10/04/15 Edited on 03/22/20 First Place 'STRAND CHOICE N' Contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 3/23/2020 4:17:00 PM
A wonderful choice for first place Anisha. Congratulations! I love the fact you have forgiven and remember the best of days. Your internal rhyme in this poem is also very impressive. xxoo
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Date: 3/23/2020 12:32:00 PM
This is quite a write, Anisha. Well-worthy of the #1 in Brian's contest this week. "in somber solitude, / enclosed by thorny fence of tolerance". Congratulations ~ John
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 3/23/2020 1:38:00 PM
Thanks John.Blessing
Date: 8/6/2016 8:37:00 AM
This is really good, congrats!
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Date: 8/6/2016 2:12:00 AM
Anisha, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by my blog "BOSSY COW." if you'd like, enjoy my sheer, simple madness. Hugs ~LINDA~
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Date: 10/13/2015 1:20:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Anisha! Keep your sweet words flowing!
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 10/13/2015 12:08:00 PM
Thanks for your appreciation Are you a physician ?

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