Adieu

And remember this departure is not final distant stars will light up my path again I will come back to you someday every step that takes me away from you ultimately will bring us even closer ============000============ Placement- 2nd (September 2013) Contest- Acrostic of 5 letter word (adieu) Sponsor- Andrea Dietrich © kash poet (kashinath karmakar) ============000============

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/18/2015 11:53:00 PM

Beautiful, loved this one

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/20/2013 9:57:00 PM

Hi Kash, , congratulations with your awesome Acrositc poem *** LOVE ***LINDA

Skat A

Date: 9/20/2013 4:04:00 PM

Kash, , Congratulations, with your awesome and fun Acrostic ........ luv ~SKAT~

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/16/2013 7:32:00 AM

Kash, you've done it again. congrats. BG

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/16/2013 5:30:00 AM

A very well crafted poem. Very original and creative work. Congrats on your win :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/15/2013 8:46:00 AM

Oh, I love this one, Kash. I'm glad I didn't miss this gem of acrostic poetry!! Congrats!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/15/2013 8:46:00 AM

Charmingly romantic! as always Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/15/2013 7:59:00 AM

Congrats on your lovely romantic poem taking top honors Kash.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/15/2013 6:57:00 AM

beautiful Kash...congrats on your win :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/15/2013 6:21:00 AM

Kash this is excellent love it congrats on win Shadow x smile

Yvette Lisa Ndlovu

Date: 9/15/2013 4:40:00 AM

Beautiful words, they made me smile...so so very sweet....love how you haven`t given up. Congrats on the win!!! ^_^ Y.L.N

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2013 3:34:00 AM

Kash, I LOVED this one So romantic and what a great ending you gave it. Congrats to you. Wish you would line it up so that the word ADIEU could be seen going straight down. Centering is not good with acrostic poems!!

Danesh Morgan

Date: 9/15/2013 3:23:00 AM

Congrats on your win.Morgan

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/10/2013 1:29:00 PM

I'm so glad to see that you haven't said adieu in reality!! This is why you are so exceptional........every poem sings!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/10/2013 1:27:00 PM

and hello to you, kashi!..:) how art thou?..huggs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/9/2013 1:20:00 PM

what a comeback, kashi... immense write; you are alive!.. just wrote an acrostic now, and i feel it pales in comparison to yours.. come comment!.. nice to read you again, bud!..increedible! :) huggs

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/8/2013 7:53:00 PM

WOW!! This is so tremendous!! I found this poem to be the perfect romantic gift to anyone when you are saying goodbye to him/her! It's kind of one of those writes that is given to someone that you want to get to know better, but whom you must depart that first night together! I truly loved reading this lovely and enlightening piece this evening! What a brilliant verse, Great Work!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/8/2013 3:30:00 PM

Wow this is so true when love blooms the pang of absence make the heart fonder to blossom.in a magic garden.I miss your poems..Glad to.read this gem kash.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/8/2013 12:13:00 PM

KASH! I was so scared when I saw the title that this was a real goodbye poem about you leaving us! I'm SO glad it isn't AND...IT IS AMAZING! Beautiful in every way, my dear. Good luck in contest. You will go FAR!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/8/2013 11:37:00 AM

- A goodbye makes us think about what we can lose ... well written, Kash ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)