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Addicted.. the Untold War

You don't know me We have never met Yet somehow, your face before me I cannot forget I envision you Your eyes, your nose, your mouth Although you do not exist as a being You are sweet to smell I imagine you are sour to taste But somehow you make people feel empowered, addicted You ruin lives and families You make babies born needing you before They even take their first breath You take mothers and fathers Aunts, uncles, and cousins You take the young ones, The teenagers so easily You stop their lives And I just don't understand If more people said "no" If more people had control Maybe you would eventually go Maybe you would not even exist This is my greatest wish.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/17/2009 8:42:00 PM
Thank you for the comment, this is me repaying the favor. Love what you went with on the subject. Good length and content is there. You didn't go into depth and you didn't have to. I like this and I'm glad I read it. Thank you.
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Date: 6/12/2009 2:50:00 PM
i like this poem mom i love you love,shi
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Date: 5/27/2009 2:23:00 PM
A wonderful write shedding light on a dark subject. It speaks of the pain and suffering that is caused by addiction and makes it not a word, or an issue, but personifies it so that one can actually face it and push it away. You made it tangiable. Very well done, very creative, and hopefully helpful to one that may need the strength to kick the addiction out of their life. Smiles from Lolita
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