Adam and Eve

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ADAM and EVE In Eden Garden Sir Adam with First Lady Eve Madam walked happy, no boredom. Ignorant of malice or crime. The Couple ! Man and Woman Prime. Simple food taken every time!. Sappy to share just one apple, relishing that food as staple, didn’t claim sumptuous or ample. Fancy Dress! No need. Clothes of leaves, instead. No Affluence ! No Greed. Gained necessary wisdom Started Human Kingdom: Population at random. No demand for luxury. Surplus Accessories Wealth unnecessary.

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