Adam-Eve

Adam First, lonely Observing, naming, learning, man, husband, wife, woman Helping, sinning, knowing sorrowful, second Eve Ó November 28, 2011 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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John Castro

Date: 11/28/2011 12:16:00 PM

lol notice when sin came in lol somewhat after eve hahaha heads up 7 up lol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/28/2011 12:49:00 PM

Yeah! lol Eve was very smart! She knew how to get her man! lol Which was necessary in order for the human race to beign...of course! Big Smiles.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/28/2011 8:25:00 AM

Like your diamante poem Dane Ann. Yes Adam and Eve had many things to do to get it right. love phyl

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/28/2011 12:49:00 PM

Thanks for reading and commenting, Phyllis

Tony Lane

Date: 11/28/2011 8:09:00 AM

I just wrote a blog entry as if I were Adam. Eve comes across as very liberated and not overly guilty.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/28/2011 7:39:00 AM

I guess woman's lib removed some of the sorrow...or not LOL It all depends on the couple and love...but Adam and Eve had a LOT TO DO...pulling all of those weeds. (I guess I need to write another poem about them, since they are strongly on my mind of late.)