Actions of Love

"Actions of Love"
by:  Eric L. Boddie

What if I were to instigate your heart to join with my own
Would you make me the place you call home

If I challenge your body to a duel of pleasure
Would you be willing to expose your treasure

If I dare your Soul to become my mate
Would you define me as your fate

If I urge your eyes to see my truth
Would you help me build Love under just one roof

If I influence your hands to want to touch my frame
Would you declare yourself as only my personal toy without shame

If I bet your tongue that it can't out wrestle mine in any timing
Would you just accept it or would you die trying

If I inflict you with Love That's Truly Heavenly
Would you take your rightful place in Eric's Destiny....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Makama Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 8:39 AM
What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 4:21 PM
Aaahhh, that is so romantic and humbling, and I like everything of it.
Orban Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 9:52 AM
This is such a romantic poem. Greeting card material with a blank space where persons name could be. ie, so and so's destiny. Love this very heartfelt. Toni O.
Myle Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 2:01 PM
I love how romantically erotic this piece is. It's sexual, yet tasteful all the same. I loved how you put it all together.
A   Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 11:55 PM
a very alluring read Eric, thank you for sharing:), Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. LOVE LINDA
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 10:56 PM
so very ROMANTIC :) it's a 7 :)) Take care
White Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 10:36 AM
This is so very romantic and lovely.
Campbell Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 7:04 PM
Fabulous piece, Eric. Especially the last two lines. Marvelous. Thanks for the visit.
Sage Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 10:56 AM
excellent write Eric...lovely
Andresen Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 6:19 AM
....yes, IF ... :) - A lovely poem, Eric - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 10:31 PM
That lady that truly is waiting will be ready to take the challenge a soul mate is the right lady . Great write Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 6:33 PM
I hope you have found the right one to take up the challenge Eric:-) hugs Jan xx7
Lane Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 6:10 PM
Those ifs sound as though they'd be very hard to turn down by the right woman. Very romantic and sensual, Eric.
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