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Acting Out (Adult)

Steamy windows, sticky fingers, nothing ventured, nothing gained, drapes are open, quite the floor show, naughty boy, she's got him trained. They are primed, she strokes her body, sweaty palms and velvet skin, anticipation is the trigger, ejaculation is the sin. But is it really sin, or pleasure? satisfaction's guaranteed as the goal of each performer, gratifying primal need. At the end two kinds of fluid spatters harmlessly in hand, secret hunger, public promise, perpetrators, just as planned.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/27/2009 9:39:00 PM
Lol well written friend! -darkpoet
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Date: 4/27/2009 2:18:00 PM
Indeed, a "perfect score" for writing erotic verse, Keith. I like this style of writing, though it's not something I can produce. Per your comment, nothing offensive at all. Have you read some of Christopher Higgins' poems? I need a cold shower after reading them. He is quite a master. Love, Carolyn
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