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Poetic Form: Rhyme
Inspired: 2024 January 06
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I never thought a stream could be so cool to touch as it drifts past me, thrush the flows its distance none to measure the length for it roams so free, scopes the heaven yond heights reflect itself quite pleased of that which did see, trance meandering stretched sounds breath down tones, in dark and light equally, stage is mine, turns I to 'words,' drifts, roams, see, and be ... defined, --equally.

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Date: 1/7/2024 4:11:00 PM
I loved the journey, the meandering with you, entranced with the stream. Well done! have a great evening, Sara
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Hilo Poet
Date: 1/7/2024 4:14:00 PM
My hearty thanks, Sara. Journey well, my friend. Aloha, William
Date: 1/7/2024 5:43:00 AM
This is so beautiful my friend. Much enjoyed the journey through your words. Lovely tone and flow, William.
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Date: 1/7/2024 8:30:00 AM
I appreciate your words, Vijay. Though this was a bit on a fly, my friend. Aloha, William

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