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Across a Field

Across a field, the tips of tall grass tremble in the moonlight. There are silent wings gliding the dark, soft callings way off in the distance and occasionally, glowing eyes seen high in the trees. Secrets are kept here sealed from sight, mysteries, a cache of wonders hidden under a thick silence fencing off the borderlands between dream and the oblivion of sleep. Here too are desires still unshaped in their nurseries, soul shadows rummaging through old remains, fears, childhood, the unanswered pleas echoing up from somewhere, looking for an opening to get inside your head.

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Date: 11/3/2023 3:02:00 PM
an outstanding and masterfully created poem, Paul. Your words created an air of mystery that grabbed my attention. I loved 'cache of wonders' as well as old remains, fears, etc. Your poem spoke to me, and I have to fav it for later. enjoy your evening, Sara
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/4/2023 5:04:00 AM
Thankyou Sara for entering into the poem and allowing it to speak....your comments were savoured with pleasure....good to know when a poem connects. Value your thoughtful words. Paul
Date: 11/3/2023 8:31:00 AM
I'd want to keep those borderlands fenced off and a net placed over it to keep those glowing eyes from getting to me. Pulling the covers over my head wouldn't suffice. Paul, this is scary good.
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/4/2023 4:47:00 AM
Good advice Lin...akways a challenge in securing the borders to the subconscious...seems to sneak through somewhere. Although I don't mind if it finds its way into a poem. Many thanks for giving it your time Lin.
Date: 11/3/2023 7:08:00 AM
that ever tempting door between dreams and nightmares....Excellent write, as usual, Paul.
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/4/2023 4:39:00 AM
Paper thin it is....pointless in trying to lock it. Thanks John for giving this poem your time...always valued.
Date: 11/3/2023 7:03:00 AM
I like the days when I push them over and carry on with my day - I enjoyed reading your words as always
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/4/2023 4:35:00 AM
Thanks DD....always a treasured companion to these little creations of mine as they venture out into the world.

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