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Beauty is something we see with individual eyes, deep within our soul,resides attraction,waiting ,asleep yet longing to be aroused; Our need to be recognised, a desire to recognise, reciprocate and hold close subtle scents,inherent and so universally held; A certain something unique, intercourses between eyes, a novel read by a glance in seconds,might last a lifetime indelibly imprints,love; Only time,can reveal imperfections of conceit, when ego retreats and aborts the frail foetus in pools of recrimination.

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Date: 2/22/2020 6:31:00 PM
This poem emphasizes to me that a fresh reflection of ourselves is very much alive in that which we admire, love, and also that which we criticize Poet...J.A.B.
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Brian Strand
Date: 2/23/2020 3:01:00 AM
Cheers Justin,have a good day
Date: 11/17/2011 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Give Me Your Best Shot" contest Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2011 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your third place win with this amazing write! Lori
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Date: 11/14/2011 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John Freeman, Brian
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Date: 11/14/2011 1:03:00 AM
a poem to remember with fine ctructure and vivid imagery, brian... my best cheers to you for the great win :) huggs
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Date: 11/13/2011 7:44:00 PM
Enjoyed your entry Brian. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/13/2011 5:31:00 PM
Amazing, Brian... the persona we detect just inside the presentation, which can be totally wrong, as time will reveal. Congratulations on your worthy third. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/19/2011 1:36:00 PM
Interesting write Brian I enjoy your use of enjambment! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/19/2011 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on the 11th place win in the contest, Brian
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Date: 4/19/2011 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Razzle, Dazzle" Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:52:00 AM
This one goes to my fav's BRIAN. A True masterpiece. Elaine
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Date: 4/18/2011 8:48:00 PM
Congrats Brian on your success in my contest luv.. appreciate your constant support always.. all winners now posted finally to view.. contest problems all fixed too..
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Date: 8/16/2010 2:49:00 PM
Just stopping by to remind you of my newest contest The Birds And The Bees. I hope you will enter the contest if you haven't already Brian. Thank you if you have already entered or plan on entering. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2010 8:49:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the contest with this unique work. Dan C
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Date: 8/6/2010 6:29:00 AM
Many congratulations Brian on your win in Carol's fine contest with this gem of poetry >> James
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Date: 8/5/2010 11:43:00 PM
Awesome write, and so true. Congrats on your win- this really is excellent!
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Date: 8/5/2010 5:37:00 PM
Beautiful verse. Congratulations Brian. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/5/2010 5:11:00 PM
Congrats on this well deserved win, Brian
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Date: 8/5/2010 4:09:00 PM
Congratulations, Brian on your magnificent vers among the winner circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/5/2010 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/5/2010 1:09:00 PM
Congrats Brian on your winning poem in Carol's contest with a superior write and wonderful win today.. enjoy my friend.. another special moment in the winners circle..with luv..
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Date: 3/3/2010 12:08:00 AM
Brian, this is Magnificent! Blessings, Connie
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Date: 3/2/2010 8:52:00 PM
Awesome write, Brian! Your wording is excellent and so is the imagery used in this interesting introspection. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/2/2010 7:06:00 PM
An amazing write Brian ..so lovely and melodious full of romanticism and emotion.. a true work of art ..my new fav.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/2/2010 10:23:00 AM
Great topic on which you have chosen to write these great lines...Explain what you mean by syllbic free...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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