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   Second Place on Contest by La Constance France

First Place on contest Your Choice ( June 22 )

by Brian Strand

 

'Joy of love lasts for a while, pain persists life long.'.... Poet ACHE Had he ever loved me! But then why he came at early dawn When Sun shimmering crimson. His eyes glistened. I looked straight to his eyes. He walked away leaving me confused. I failed to descry my reflection in his eyes. Had he ever loved me! But then why he stepped hesitant in scorching noon when Sun blazing brilliant. My eager eyes waited to listen something He neither talked nor smiled, just passed I was not sure whether he turned back for a while. Had he ever loved me! But then why he hurried to reach me at dusty dusk, When sun to set and day wore grey mask. I stretched my hand to welcome He did not hold but went away. Yet I am not sure whether he wobbled or ignored. Had he ever loved me! But then why he appeared at misty night When crescent Moon looked pale not bright. He sat silent at corner of my bed. I yearned to lean on his shoulder I dreamed to be in his arms. But he just glanced and left. I am carrying my ache throughout life because I had loved him.

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Date: 4/1/2024 10:51:00 PM
so many can relate to your poignant poem, wish you the best yann
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Date: 4/2/2024 10:06:00 AM
Thanks.. It is an old poem. I had to re submit as it was deleted by mistake.

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