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Ach Toe B-R-R-R

There was a girl on the Isle of Man Freezing her buttocks off in the can There was no one to care If she let off hot air So toasting toes are now, "Owed to Jan"!

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/3/2019 2:05:00 PM

Can't decide which fate is worse -- the freezing bathroom or the hot air. So funny, Rico. I see Jan enjoyed it too! Hugs, carolyn

Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/4/2019 4:43:00 PM

Freezing bathrooms are an horror story no one writes about; why is that? Sadly, there are not enough beans to help warm toes in a freezing bathroom! Aloha! Rico

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/2/2019 5:35:00 PM

LOL! Good one, Rico! Janice

Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/4/2019 4:41:00 PM

Mahalo, Janice! Aloha! Rico

Judy Ball

Date: 10/2/2019 12:24:00 PM

Too cute . This one really made me smile. Great Stuff. God Bless, JB

Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/4/2019 4:41:00 PM

Keep reading, and I'll get a laugh out of you, yet! Aloha! Rico

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2019 3:28:00 PM

I enjoyed this one, and seeing Jan's fun reply!

Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/4/2019 4:40:00 PM

Mahalo for reading and commenting, Andrea! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison

Date: 10/1/2019 7:28:00 AM

Haha ha do you have a camera hidden in our houses lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/3/2019 2:06:00 PM

Maybe the hot air will melt the snow. Hmmm...

Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/2/2019 4:45:00 PM

Credit where credit is due! Ode to Jan has received international acclaim, most especially where winter snow has already fallen! Thank for clearing the air! Aloha! Rico