Accident.

Trapped inside this prison
Entangled in my mind,
Because I did not listen
To the warning at the time.

My life is just a blur right now
As I gather all my thoughts
Trying to remember, somehow
As my memory slowly rots

I remember a car
And a very bright light
Physically flying far
Barely sustaining the blight

I can hear the doctor talking
As my parents start to weep:
“Perhaps again, she’s never walking,
But the life-support, we’ll keep”

“It’ll do her good to hear you voice,
Perhaps she will respond.
It is too soon to rejoice,
But I promise she’s not gone.”

I can feel my parents hope,
Engulfing the entire room.
The reality they’ll never grope
Is the soon impending doom.

I know I won’t rise again-
I feel myself fading,
I have no fear; I will win.
Paradise is waiting.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
November 11, 2010 at 12:27 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest. The best to you in the finals Amanda. Love, Carol
Hilliker Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 9:11 AM
You suprised me with the ending, Amanda. I really liked your poem. Thanks for sharing.
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October 17, 2010 at 3:41 AM
Amanda, very well written and a well deserved placement on the charts enjoyed the read..thanks Kurt
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October 15, 2010 at 11:34 AM
AMANDA, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D."
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October 15, 2010 at 9:26 AM
GOOD MORNING! AMANDA, CoNGRATULATIoNS ON HAVING YOUR POEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT"
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October 12, 2010 at 2:07 PM
Amanda, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d.
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October 12, 2010 at 9:24 AM
This one hits home. On July 3, my son was on life support with massive injuries no one should have survived. Miraculously, he pulled through. Congrats on the feature. Vince
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October 12, 2010 at 5:26 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
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October 12, 2010 at 4:59 AM
heartfelt write, enjoyed reading your poetry today. susi
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October 12, 2010 at 2:32 AM
enjoyed this Amanda, Harry
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October 12, 2010 at 1:09 AM
Great write about a tragic event in today's society.Congratulaions on being featured on homepage.My son-in-law was behind a car yesterday morning and it was going fast and left the road.Hit a Georgia pine.The young girl seventeen years old driving.He called 911 and stayed with her..Kept talking to her telling her to stay with him don't go.It took the ambulance 30 minutes to get there.It was a dr's daughter.The dr got there about time they got her in the ambulance..Don't know if she made it..Sara
Brown Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 6:02 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Amanda what a great way to have it seen. Love, Carol
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October 10, 2010 at 7:08 PM
congrats on being featured this week..this was a sad one but I liked it... BG
Reents Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 4:16 PM
beautifull poem. I wish I would of had the insight to write that after my accident. I think you must be gifted to be able to keep focus after something so terrible
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October 10, 2010 at 11:59 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
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March 30, 2010 at 4:37 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Amanda. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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March 29, 2010 at 7:45 PM
Caught me in a scary moment where you realize how delicate and precious life is. Nice Write. ~ KC
Taylor Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 7:34 PM
Very cool. Very reminiscent of Dickinson, who wrote many a verse on the process of dying. Keep it up!
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