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Tears of a Clown

disguised tears of a clown smile turned to wretched frown behind makeup his eyes glazed over at the sight of daisies and smell of clover in summer fields he last saw his love flew off to heaven she gentle dove his heart in pieces shattered remembering the only thing that mattered now sunless days on automatic pilot skies from greys to blues to violet feigning composure while on edge he dances nonchalantly on a ledge concealed tears the people miss a clown one step away from the abyss AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on February 25, 2020 for contest CLOWN AT THE ABYSS sponsored by KAI MICHAEL NEUMANN

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Date: 2/29/2020 4:53:00 PM
Very expressive, beautiful, Line...the pain behind the mask. Regards // paul
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Date: 2/29/2020 9:02:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Paul.
Date: 2/29/2020 1:06:00 AM
A beautiful missive that does this contest justice and then some Line.
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Date: 2/29/2020 12:05:00 PM
Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/26/2020 11:42:00 PM
Sometimes clowns are the sadest people, using laughter to hide their tears. Your poem is a good example of this and a great entry for the contest.
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Date: 2/27/2020 12:35:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Juliet.
Date: 2/26/2020 9:47:00 AM
So touching ,..I couldn't get the theme at first, you inspired me to enter the contest....Yes, it is a mask that hides so many things
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Date: 2/26/2020 2:38:00 PM
So glad I was able to inspire you, Debjani. I will look for your entry.
Date: 2/26/2020 4:37:00 AM
Good luck with your entry- it is a great piece of work Line, Regards, Julie
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Date: 2/26/2020 6:44:00 AM
Thanks, Julie. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/26/2020 2:39:00 AM
excellent expression on abysmal clown// beautiful poem penned for the contest
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Date: 2/26/2020 6:44:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Mahtab.
Date: 2/25/2020 10:00:00 PM
Great entry for the contest, methinks. You've created a clown whose pain the reader feels. Super! :) Gershon
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Date: 2/26/2020 6:45:00 AM
Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated.

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