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Abuse of Soul Power

Look at those humans staring below They laugh at us, but what do they know The “intellectual” beast On greed and judgment will feast They gaze at us and think WE are slow We stare back and know they are the fools We follow a better set of rules As we hang from nature’s vines We just giggle at their whines They fail to use their soul-power tools *Written in honor of John Freeman and his "Limericks Hilarious" contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/28/2011 3:01:00 PM
men & monkeys?? monkey-men? LOL yeah who does have the soul? Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 10/26/2011 1:33:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 10/26/2011 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Moses' "Limericks" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/25/2011 4:35:00 PM
Great write, Carolyn!
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Date: 10/25/2011 2:31:00 PM
Congratulations Carolyn. You are so good at these. I did not try this one as I was not at a very hilarious time of my life. I''m getting better. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/25/2011 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your witty, Limerick win.
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Date: 10/25/2011 11:37:00 AM
As my sister stood beside the chimpanzee exhibit at the Columbus Zoo 2 weeks ago, I pondered similar thots....I got a sense they were actually making fun of her....interesting approach to that cutesy photo of John's. Much enjoyed , Carolyn. Gwendolen
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Date: 10/25/2011 9:21:00 AM
So true, Carolyn!! Perhaps we can take a few lessons from our "cousins" !! Congratulations on a well deserved win!
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Date: 10/25/2011 8:53:00 AM
LOL, made me smile...Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/24/2011 10:11:00 PM
springs ajar the soul power door, and grasping reaching we implore, lift the curse a little more, so I won't be a writhing, thoughts of hypnotising? maybe sure...
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Date: 10/24/2011 7:19:00 PM
"Amazing Precept Carolyn, Whats the young people's expression... "Blew me away." Quite worthy for first place, my friend. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/2/2011 4:19:00 PM
nice one i must say...very brilliant
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Date: 10/2/2011 3:44:00 PM
Well put dear poet, gives room for thought:)
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Date: 10/2/2011 3:12:00 PM
LOL, yes, I'd like to know what animals do think of us! Sometimes our Paddy gave such filthy looks that 'you idiot' was clearly on his mind : )
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Date: 10/2/2011 2:17:00 PM
he will love this! much wisdom conveyed here. makes me think i should have tried doing that in mine. "soul-power tools" is so clever!
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Date: 10/2/2011 1:40:00 PM
Good message conveyed hilariously Carolyn.Enjoyed reading it.Best wishes.
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