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Absence - Sad One Liner

She will never get to see the love in his eyes yet their thoughts lay always side by side. For S.One sad one liner Contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2016 3:24:00 PM

Yes,that is a sad one. I like it, Charma. Congrats in another one liner contest. Yes, my hubbie actually thought he would be able to get under that underpass. It was not the picture I showed. In his case, just the very top part of the roof came off the top! After that, he could no longer stay driving as a long distance driver.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/14/2016 11:55:00 AM

Beautiful...an emotion tugger (I think I coined this word!). This could be physical absence, or physical blindness. // paul

Lu Loo

Date: 10/13/2016 11:43:00 AM

so sadly beautiful Charmaine...congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 10/12/2016 3:36:00 PM

Much said with very little Charmaine, this could be the basis of a great, but sad romantic story, congrats Keith

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/12/2016 11:16:00 AM

Congratulations Charmaine, well deserved...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/12/2016 11:09:00 AM

- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Charmaine - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paloma P

Date: 10/12/2016 6:10:00 AM

Oh wow, true story. Good luck Charmaine.

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/11/2016 10:01:00 PM

aww

Sherri Whiteford

Date: 10/11/2016 9:47:00 PM

Beautiful words coming from a beauty of a poet, Charmaine. Good luck in contest. I haven't written any new poems in a long time. Guess I should get my thinking cap on. Take care and wishing you well.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/12/2016 7:49:00 AM