Absence

Those crimson rims I still taste,
Your pretty thoughts I constantly chaste

Hunted by those orbs filled with certainty,
One I’d be blessed to gaze till eternity

Lingering touch I feel,
That portal of another thrill

Hollowness I can’t articulate,
In this coldness I’m intoxicate

Wistful for the warmth of your voice,
Doubting if patience was the right choice?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 15, 2016 at 7:15 PM
epic write. I like the 4th couplet a lot. SKAT
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January 28, 2016 at 8:16 AM
i am deeply gratified with all of the appreciation SKAT
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