Above the Rest

Guileless, autumn lay upon a land 
past the tiresome days of summer,
above the tender roots of jaded lawn
blanketing the bulbs for nubile spring
left in kindness ~
calling winter's winds
to rest…

Wasted are the teeth of winter
on the bloodless throat of fall, 
no dinner will the withered rent-shirt 
of well spent life make
only a soft and cozy remnant 
left in kindness ~
where winter’s hoary form
can rest…



*Inspired by Bob Quigley's tanka
Autumn's Death
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 12:26 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in Brian's "What You Will" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 4:57 PM
Above the rest indeed!! A winner you are! :)
Devnath  Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 11:16 AM
Wonderful win for wonderful poem, Well done here your job of winter's rest. bl
Prabhu Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 8:25 PM
truly enchanting choice of words.... betcha the spring will sweep in faster with this one... congrats on the win.
Taylor Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 6:48 PM
Congrats, Deb. Excellent piece. Nice going. luv Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 12:31 PM
CONGRATS DEBBIE ON FIRST PLACE WIN .. A DYNAMIC SET OF TREASURE3D WORDS..
Rozario Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 12:29 PM
Only one word Debbie...WOW. Congrats on your 1st place & very nice to meet you too.
M V Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 5:58 AM
Nice beautifully knitted together,Debbie.Congratulations on your win with a well deserved poetry.Lovingly,Fabiyas
Dietrich Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 11:56 PM
I really like Bob's here and then how you got inspired to do another one on fall. I especially like the second stanza of yours, calling autumn guileless!
Jones Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 6:05 PM
Wow...banter deluxe! Beauty eve~N
Song Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 5:31 PM
I am not aware of this BQ verse that inspired this poem, but I love the way time passes through the seasonal expressions...especially how autumn lays upon a land past the tiresome days of summer....that describes mine soo well...You are such a mature poet, Debbie. REading your work helps me expand my own poetic mind! (Teenie tiny poetic mind of mine!) lol. Gwendolen
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