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    I’ll write of roses never touched
that fade in wilt, then praise their hue.
And though their rot perfumes my metaphors, 
I’ll never stoop to caress their blooms.

  And as rivers choke on oil and bone,
with caustic ink, I’ll hail their shimmer,
ignoring the discarded gluttony lining their shores,
scribing only the poetic cadence of their flow.

  And when cities burn, I’ll describe their walls descending.
And as ash clings to their children, I’ll write of their silhouettes,
believing war can be explained in words - but it can’t.
Though still, I’ll sing of them in sonnets.

  And as kings and demigods devour what’s left of us,
I’ll praise their suits - their appetites.
As they torch the ground with golden tongues,
I’ll quote their grandiose while whispering curses in rhyme.

   And as a woman weeps in foreign dust,
I’ll call her symbolic, emotive, for misery
makes a lovely metaphor when properly penned.
I’ll write of it, then move on before I feel.

   And I’ll use God like I use gold,
thin leafed and brandished, though not to be touched.
I will not pray and I will not flinch,
for holiness reads well.

   And as the sky collapses, black with smoke,
I’ll call it dusk, pretending…
breathing through filters to scrub the wind,
keeping my voice clear and my hands clean.

   And above it all I will sip and scribble
as the world burns - then call it art.
I will have saved nothing, I will have served no one,
but with words, I will have described it beautifully.

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Date: 9/5/2025 8:09:00 AM
Dear Mark, your poem is so rich, so deep and just sparkles with the rust of sarcasm. Indeed, poetry can prettify even the ugliest and inhumane aspects of humanity. Your last stanza is a scathing self-assessment so beautifully expressed, of course. Your commentary leaves me breathless, not because the "sky collapses, black with smoke", but because of your poetic prowess and finesse, your creative intelligence that turns the mirror on our selfish use of suffering for art's sake. A fav, my dear poet friend. Congratulations for your trophy win in Mark's contest! So well-deserved. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/1/2025 6:11:00 PM
Trying to see the beauty through the rot and decay. Congrats on this awesome top dogger Mark
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Date: 9/1/2025 8:51:00 AM
This is so very true. All we do is describe things we seemingly can do nothing about. The poet's plight I guess. I wrote one with the same theme. You just did it much more poetically. Congratulations on this trophy win
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Date: 8/31/2025 12:02:00 PM
Mark, a very thought provoking poem confronting complicity and community responsibility, ending with the self-indictment in the last stanza. A Fav poem for me. Congratulations on your first place win on Mile 12 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 13 has already started.
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Mark Massey
Date: 8/31/2025 6:21:00 PM
Thanks again Mark
Date: 8/31/2025 9:33:00 AM
WTF Mark, I expect great writing from you, but apparently you have no ceiling...this poem is like a black hole (its gravity too strong to resist) from line one it's a wow!
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Mark Massey
Date: 8/31/2025 6:19:00 PM
600+ sonnets over the last few years- time to branch out. This one is a break down of just about everything I’ve written, it was a fairly straight forward write. Thanks for the compliment, Craig
Date: 8/31/2025 9:23:00 AM
Congratulations Wonderful write, Mark
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Date: 8/31/2025 9:11:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem. Solemn and somber beautifully, poetically penned. I don't know that I've ever been 'led' to your poetry, but this tells me I should deliberately trek over here. I can see why this earned a trophy and I can't always say that. Perfect words and perfect imagery create the perfect feel in the reader, appropriately matching the poem's content. It hits and it sticks and congratulations! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Mark Massey
Date: 8/31/2025 6:20:00 PM
Thanks CayCay
Date: 7/15/2025 8:49:00 AM
Amazing Mark. So well-tuned to the inner feelings and outward emotion. :)
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Date: 5/29/2025 7:30:00 AM
Reality, written in script, is powerful and filled with truthful insight...too many are blind
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Mark Massey
Date: 5/29/2025 9:34:00 AM
Thanks Frederick
Date: 5/29/2025 7:17:00 AM
Awesome poetry Mark, though in reality war can never truly be word painted beautiful. It would only be a facade.
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Mark Massey
Date: 5/29/2025 9:33:00 AM
So true, thanks Tom
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