About Betty

She is not so much a kitten as a weather-vane 
studying stillness through quartered panes 

from a swollen sill while I’m at my desk, coding 
in silence, awaiting the turn of weather.

She leaps to my lap; invites my hand to collapse 
her coil, purring softly.  I can’t help but notice

the soothing sound of her notes; a timely breeze 
gently fluttering unfurled by the patient Monarch.


68 Words
5/24/17

Submitted for:  One of Five – Seventy Words or Less
Sponsored by:  Laura Loo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Daniel Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 10:33 AM
A great tribute to your cat, Phillip, she must be sure worth the distraction:)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 28, 2017 at 8:07 AM
A lovely image of your purrfect cat! Congrats, Phillip! I am saving this!
White Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 1:44 AM
This makes me smile, and I will keep smiling whether you win or not. I wish I had your way with words. It's beautiful
Garcia Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 2:10 AM
My beautiful way with words produced a smile worthy 33rd place finish here, I believe :) - BUT, in my defense, I started this at 6pm yesterday forgetting I had Astros tickets for a game at 7pm so I spent a grand total of 94 seconds writing this while looking for my tennis shoes
Turner Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 7:53 PM
Hey, I've got a friend that would love to meet your "Betty":) I would have never taken you for a cat person. Cool poem, Phillip. Good luck!
Garcia Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 10:26 PM
Hey-o! DT is back! Good to see ya man
Wanter Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 6:31 PM
A purrrrfect tribute, Phillip.
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