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Abiding In Our Abode

Haven 'til heaven.
Oasis while in exile.
Matrimonial love suite.
Ephemoral until eternity.

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Doris Culverhouse

February 9, 2010 at 5:57 AM

hot poem!!

Brandee Augustus

February 1, 2010 at 2:01 PM

I really really like this! I didn't know it was an acrostic until I looked up at your form. This is really lovely. Congratulations on a well deserved placement in this contest!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

January 31, 2010 at 8:19 AM

Congratulations Robert, on your Honorable Mention in The Rambling Poet’s “Home” Mini-Poetry contest with these loving, and wise words. Your talent has placed you in the winners circle. Smiles, Dane Ann

Carolyn Devonshire

January 30, 2010 at 5:01 PM

I read this earlier and am happy to congratulate you on your success in the contest, Robert. Well deserved. Love, Carolyn

Daver Austin

January 30, 2010 at 10:31 AM

"Oasis while in exile?" This is zenish. Mucho good. Love, daver

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

January 30, 2010 at 10:02 AM

Home is where the heart is! This poem expresses that so well. Short but sweet. THanks for sharing it with me. Have a great day! Scarlett

Sara Kendrick

January 30, 2010 at 9:14 AM

Great Acrostic here in these few words. That is the way home should be and may you always have that haven 'til heaven. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 29, 2010 at 7:53 PM

Beautiful and home is where I have returned as my new poem states.. I AM BACK thankxx to all my friends on this site.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

January 29, 2010 at 1:54 PM

Nice use of the acrostic form in this poem. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the Home contest. Keep on writing. Enjoy your success. Karen

John Loving Iii

January 29, 2010 at 1:06 PM

you lost me at "Ephemoral". john

John Loving Iii

January 29, 2010 at 1:05 PM

you lost me at "Ephemoral". john

Joyce Johnson

January 29, 2010 at 12:16 PM

Lovely acrostic. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 29, 2010 at 5:32 AM

Hi Robert... just wanted to say a big thankxxx to u for being a wonderful friend to me .. my decision to leave is final... I have posted more information on my last poem if u care to read... keep in touch and tell Taz and Mary what happened for me... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Virginia Mitchell

January 29, 2010 at 4:08 AM

This made me smile @ "Matrimonial love suite" Well done acrostic!...Thanks for your comment on mine. : )

Carolyn Devonshire

January 28, 2010 at 9:56 PM

Thank you for letting us look inside your lovely home, Robert. Excellent acrostic! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

January 28, 2010 at 9:22 PM

Robert, I feel so out of the loop, all of a sudden I am seeing "home" poems and people congratulating winners. I did not even know there WAS a home poem contest going on!! congrats, and I wish I understood the dates on these contests here. They say FEb. but we are still in January!!

Andrea Dietrich

January 28, 2010 at 9:10 PM

great opening line, haven 'til heaven. That is what it should be for everyone, a heavenly haven away from eath's travails. Too bad it is just the opposite for many who are abused in this world. Thanks so much for what you said about my latest sonnet. LUv, andrea