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Abecedarian - true adulation

Anchored in the Aura of your loyalty, the Breathtaking mood you enhance in me, for I Cannot fathom the length of your love Definitely not enveloped in envy but care Every time that phone rings you race to it Fervently like a worship, in offerings Garnished with sacrifices and praises Hammered by my hypnotic smile you hug In, triggered by my endangering tear you Jug ruthlessly into its source, instilling Kindness and knowledge endlessly Like a rugged professor, family is not Mostly drawn out of blood, you have stood Needlessly in my heart, because the bond Overcomes every thorn that pierces our soul Preciously evacuating every dead ash laying Quietly in my heart, you have genuinely and Relentlessly proven you are worth a million Size too enormous to spill, your support Tenaciously clench my wrist like a pillar of Unraveling mysteries. You share vital Visions and make us run with it like thieves. Wondering amid primrose you glisten like Xanthopetals, serenading your bloom Yet unmarred flawlessly in Perihelion, let your Zestful being be celebrated for being a true friend.

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Date: 2/9/2024 11:34:00 PM
Sometimes friends prove more supportive than close family. To have such a close friend is a boon in anyone's life. "your support Tenaciously clench my wrist like a pillar of Unraveling mysteries.". One who is ready to lend a hand and tenaciously hold us in fair weather and foul weather adds to our sense of security and confidence. A beautiful Abecedarian dear Tonye!
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Tonye George
Date: 2/24/2024 10:31:00 AM
Yes they do. Thank you Valsa
Date: 12/29/2023 4:09:00 PM
One of the best I've read of the Abecedarian poems, Tonye. Well written to form, but with much more depth that I usually see in this form. Your poem flowed well and was a smooth read. As indicated, often friends are closer than family, especially a true friend. I want to wish you a Happy New Year and a great 2024! Write On! Bill
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Tonye George
Date: 12/31/2023 5:17:00 PM
Thank you for your support Bill. True friends are a great deal. A happy new year to you.
Date: 12/18/2023 2:58:00 AM
Ahh, this is so amazing, a brilliantly crafted abecedarian poem with so much depth and vividness of imageries.. Especially, this flows so impeccably too..I absolutely love your choice for the X alphabet, it's so unique and I learnt a new word as well..This is just a heartfelt write that reflected how some bonds become so nurturing and peaceful, beyond family..And they have the power to overcome every hardship of life..Very true! A pleasure reading this wonderful poem, dear poetess, sending light
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Tonye George
Date: 12/18/2023 9:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Hiya. Some bonds are stronger than blood.
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 12/18/2023 2:59:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your beautiful win in the contest, so well-deserved! :)
Date: 12/17/2023 3:35:00 AM
Back to your beautiful Abecedarian with Congratulations on your well deserved win. Wish you a Happy Sunday, dear Tonye!
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Tonye George
Date: 12/17/2023 5:46:00 AM
Thank you lovely Valsa. Congratulations to you too.
Date: 12/16/2023 11:03:00 AM
I could fee the love in your words.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
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Tonye George
Date: 12/16/2023 11:28:00 PM
Thank you so much Silent one, thank you for your support, I appreciate.
Date: 12/12/2023 7:56:00 PM
"family is not Mostly drawn out of blood, you have stood Needlessly in my heart, because the bond Overcomes every thorn that pierces our soul" You are absolutely right dear Tonye. There are deeper friendships than blood relationships, friends who will stand with us through thick and thin. Your diction is wonderful. A beautiful entry for the contest. All the best dear friend.
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Tonye George
Date: 12/16/2023 11:27:00 PM
Thank you dear Valsa. Friendship is indeed a goal we all look forward to.
Date: 12/12/2023 7:36:00 AM
Needlessly in my heart, because the bond Overcomes every thorn that pierces our soul. Good to have a friend like that. Thanks for sharing your contest entry with us. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara K
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Tonye George
Date: 12/16/2023 11:25:00 PM
Thank you so much Sara. True friendship is one of the most beautiful things.
Date: 12/12/2023 6:58:00 AM
Its amazing how sometimes real support and genuine love comes from not family but others we meet by chance. Maybe it is what stars have designed for us. I really felt the lines “ because the bond Overcomes every thorn that pierces our soul Preciously evacuating every dead ash laying Quietly in my heart,” and the ending is impeccable! So good your choice of words . You are truly gifted. Goodluck in the contest dear talented soul. Love your X new word for me
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Tonye George
Date: 12/12/2023 7:04:00 AM
Thank you Ink. Yes we can not overemphasize on the golden worth of true friendship. It's hard to find, sometimes even harder than love but it sticks forever.

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