Abc Melancholic Angel Adopts'smiling Depression'

Amidst all the false accusations & tensions..
Blessing seems to have been showered 
       infinitely upon her,
Causing an absolute turn within.. by
Disguising her into a solid rock ~keeping herself busy
Engaged in lot of different activities, 
Frequently fondles the brain to listen her own thoughts 
      ~perceptions which,
Grins at her occasionally ..later helps her to glide 
        through....also she constantly chooses to~
Hear few wisdom words from loved ones.. so that
It keeps her inspired abundantly further pushing her 
       to be..
Jubilant in sharing cheer to everyone around.
Keeping strong faith in herself she tries to
Lavishly construct happiness with her 440 volts smile 
      ~thereby leading her to..
Magnetically attract adamant souls filling them with 
Nostalgic memories and taking them away from
Obstacles temporarily and bringing their
Prejudices in line.. that's been loaded inside them 
        in eminent..
Quantity, quietly she aids them to..
Retire from all their problems & fervently 
Scrambles them up by pouring solutions into 
        their heart's. 
Thoroughly re-assuring their well-being she also tries
Understanding their desires~slides faith & peace 
Vivaciously and vigorously, and
Willfully watches them turn excited by
Xeroxing their state of mind which is 
Yarning within them in
Zeal.

Disclaimer:"Smiling depression” is a term for someone 
living with depression on the inside while appearing 
perfectly happy or content on the outside. 

9-5-2020
~DEEPA~

Note1:ABC poetry contest
Sponsor:Allright Poet
Forgot to enter:-(


5th place in the Contest.
Note 3:N-A re-run 7 Poetry Contest
Sponsor:John Hamilton

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Date: 6/17/2020 2:25:00 AM
Wow Deepa! You have mastered another level of poetry. An ABC form with such a thoughtful topic and articulating imagery with heartfelt emotions. I believe all of us have suffered from smiling depression at some point of our lives. I am so glad I got to read this masterpiece of yours. And glad that it got placed. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/17/2020 12:30:00 PM
Wooh.....aditi mam...I really feel cherished to hear such amazing review from you..:-) Reading this comment.. I am pleased to know that you thoroughly enjoyed my work.:-) Thanks for showering love and blessings on me in abundance.:-) I don't know whether it's really a masterpiece ..but your motivation and appreciation makes me flit high in the air:-D My Best wishes for all your works too..keep doing great.:-) Take care.Much love~Deepa
Date: 6/15/2020 10:31:00 AM
An ABC poem is quite a challenge but you pulled it off V. Congrats for a little recognition of your diligent effort in this write!
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Date: 6/15/2020 12:22:00 PM
Hello sir, Thankyou for this little recognition given for my work:-) Am glad to receive your warm appreciation and encouragement. Best wishes for all your works too.:-) Take care.Warm Regards~Deepa
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