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Abc Melancholic Angel Adopts'smiling Depression'

Amidst all the false accusations & tensions.. Blessing seems to have been showered infinitely upon her, Causing an absolute turn within.. by Disguising her into a solid rock ~keeping herself busy Engaged in lot of different activities, Frequently fondles the brain to listen her own thoughts ~perceptions which, Grins at her occasionally ..later helps her to glide through....also she constantly chooses to~ Hear few wisdom words from loved ones.. so that It keeps her inspired abundantly further pushing her to be.. Jubilant in sharing cheer to everyone around. Keeping strong faith in herself she tries to Lavishly construct happiness with her 440 volts smile ~thereby leading her to.. Magnetically attract adamant souls filling them with Nostalgic memories and taking them away from Obstacles temporarily and bringing their Prejudices in line.. that's been loaded inside them in eminent.. Quantity, quietly she aids them to.. Retire from all their problems & fervently Scrambles them up by pouring solutions into their heart's. Thoroughly re-assuring their well-being she also tries Understanding their desires~slides faith & peace Vivaciously and vigorously, and Willfully watches them turn excited by Xeroxing their state of mind which is Yarning within them in Zeal. Disclaimer:"Smiling depression” is a term for someone living with depression on the inside while appearing perfectly happy or content on the outside. 9-5-2020 ~DEEPA~ Note1:ABC poetry contest Sponsor:Allright Poet Forgot to enter:-( 5th place in the Contest. Note 3:N-A re-run 7 Poetry Contest Sponsor:John Hamilton

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Date: 6/17/2020 2:25:00 AM
Wow Deepa! You have mastered another level of poetry. An ABC form with such a thoughtful topic and articulating imagery with heartfelt emotions. I believe all of us have suffered from smiling depression at some point of our lives. I am so glad I got to read this masterpiece of yours. And glad that it got placed. Congratulations on your win :)
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V. Deepa
Date: 6/17/2020 12:30:00 PM
Wooh.....aditi mam...I really feel cherished to hear such amazing review from you..:-) Reading this comment.. I am pleased to know that you thoroughly enjoyed my work.:-) Thanks for showering love and blessings on me in abundance.:-) I don't know whether it's really a masterpiece ..but your motivation and appreciation makes me flit high in the air:-D My Best wishes for all your works too..keep doing great.:-) Take care.Much love~Deepa
Date: 6/15/2020 10:31:00 AM
An ABC poem is quite a challenge but you pulled it off V. Congrats for a little recognition of your diligent effort in this write!
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V. Deepa
Date: 6/15/2020 12:22:00 PM
Hello sir, Thankyou for this little recognition given for my work:-) Am glad to receive your warm appreciation and encouragement. Best wishes for all your works too.:-) Take care.Warm Regards~Deepa

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