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Abc Me ... (Revised)

Again, its time to Be like a Character who Does care that Each letter must Find itself joining another to Go on this Hunt In search of Just the right words to Kindle an alphabet Lyrical run, but, instead Marches more Nearly into an Oblivious obnoxious Pursuit to pick up Quickly the Rhyme So sublime (or stomach Turning) to grow Uglier than Vericose veins or Wilder than an Xotic ... (oops, does it need the "e"?) Yippety ... Zippety-doo-daw day ! reworked for Syed Amaan Ahmad's contest "ABC Format" February 2010

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Date: 2/28/2010 5:45:00 AM
I know, Sue, if you are a perfectionist - which you seem to be - poetry can turn you off as well as on. No use going ape-s though. Whatever, you have my sympathy because I too suffer from wordjam. Got your mail. There are more spooks than you might think. Love, daver
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Date: 2/27/2010 8:48:00 PM
A sweet entry of an ABC poem Sue.. good luck in the contest... Syed will appreciate all our efforts to enter his great contest... my entry is Caravan.. my only ABC attempt ..thankxxx for a great well done poem.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/27/2010 8:39:00 PM
You're on a roll, Sue, and you sound so happy tonight! Good for you. Enjoyed the reference to "Vericose Veins." I can't write these ABCs, so hats off to you! Love, Carolyn
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