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Abashed

Almost all of us at one time or another have felt abashed Bothered or irked when hopes and dreams were dashed Admonished or discouraged that we didn't follow through Struggling to succeed at the things we said we would do Heartbroken to think we disappointed those we hold dear Embarrassed by our failures until we silently shed a tear Disquieted and grieved, we live with the foe called 'fear.' February 26, 2023 A Forms and Words Challenge Poetry Contest Sponsored by Sotto Poet

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Date: 3/4/2023 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Lin!
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Date: 3/3/2023 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your write. Let Fear be gone. Have a wonderful day......................
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Date: 3/2/2023 10:10:00 AM
Lin, outstanding work, and many compliments on your win in my Writing Challenge - A Words and Forms. Blessings.
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Date: 2/28/2023 5:53:00 AM
An acrostic rhyme. Awesome Lin. Best for the contest! :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/28/2023 6:50:00 AM
Thanks for the good luck wishes, Linda.
Date: 2/27/2023 1:19:00 AM
A well composed acrostic Lin, your last line hits the nail on the head, fear our biggest obstacle to success. Good luck in the contest and enjoy your week ahead. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/27/2023 7:21:00 AM
Thanks so much for reading and commenting on this one, Tom. I really am grateful for your thoughts.

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