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The notorious Jones gang had robbed the bank in town And as they made their escape a man was gunned down It was Bill the mayor and he'd tried to stop the gang I'd been walking by the river when I'd heard a loud bang. I ran towards the bank and saw the gang ride away Bill was so badly injured he died later that day I was sheriff of the town and asked for volunteers Ten good men raised their hands to rapturous cheers. I had a hunch they'd head west to the old copper mine Where a deserted cabin stood by the railroad line It had a well for fresh water that their horses would need They'd be so thirsty having run at a galloping speed. We all saddled up our horses and headed west out of town It was now starting to get dark as the sun was going down A few hours out we found the cabin where they'd rested The fire was still warm as the dying embers suggested. They'd split up their haul we found the empty bags discarded We too stopped for a rest and soon the cabin we vacated We carried on and reached the badlands that godforsaken place Where many a poor soul had disappeared without trace. We came across the outlaws camp later the same day And for the murder of Bill I was going to make them pay We surrounded their camp and a shootout began I shouted to the posse "we need them alive if you can". The gangs bullets ran out and they put their hands in the air They cast aside their weapons they hadn't a care We handcuffed the four of them and headed back to town And we arrived back that evening just before sundown. The townsfolk were ecstatic and our praises they sang The next day in the courthouse all were sentenced to hang Their lawyers plea for leniency by the judge was rejected But if you rob and kill then swift justice is to be expected. Written on Friday 19th June 2020 For thesaurus -Abandon Or Abandon Poetry Contest Sponsored By A Dear Heart.

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Date: 6/25/2020 12:54:00 PM
A big big congratulations on your win Tom! What an epic tale, so so enjoyable.. I am glad the gang which robbed the bank was later hanged.. Oh nice piece.
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Date: 6/25/2020 1:01:00 PM
Thank you Funom, I'm glad you enjoyed it Crime certainly doesn't pay. Tom
Date: 6/24/2020 7:31:00 PM
Tom, congratulations on your win in my abandon contest with this wonderfully penned poem, you skill at storytelling is really great _Constance
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Date: 6/24/2020 7:52:00 PM
Thank you very much Constance, I'm pleased you enjoyed it, thank you too for hosting. Tom
Date: 6/22/2020 7:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Tom. You deserved it.
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Date: 6/23/2020 3:16:00 AM
Thank you Caren, my love of the old west helped me with this one. Tom
Date: 6/22/2020 9:40:00 AM
Awesome poem - you are quite the story teller Tom and this write I am sure will rate very high in the contest. Great poetic craftsmanship. Blessings, Jenny,
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Date: 6/22/2020 12:02:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Hope you're well Tom
Date: 6/22/2020 9:34:00 AM
Awesome poem - you are quite the story teller Tom and this write I am sure will rate very high in the contest. Great poetic craftsmanship. Blessings, Jenny,
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Date: 6/22/2020 8:11:00 AM
Oh this is absolutely great Tom! Your engaging storytelling keeps me gripped till the end. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/22/2020 8:42:00 AM
Thank you Aditi, I'm pleased you enjoyed the story. Tom
Date: 6/22/2020 2:21:00 AM
Oh yes, your poetry as usually is amazing, love how you've wrapped this around those words for the contest, i'm sure Constance will love this..
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Date: 6/22/2020 3:27:00 AM
Thank you Harry, it was quite challenging. Tom
Date: 6/21/2020 10:34:00 PM
Great historical-type write, Tom. Vintage T.C., I'd say! … I like that swift justice at the end. We need some of that badly in the USA. Cases drag on forever, frustrating all parties involved. As we are wont to say: The wheels of justice grind slowly. As long as justice prevails, I'm all for swift and sure! Thanks, Tom. :) Gershon
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Date: 6/22/2020 3:26:00 AM
Thank you Gershon, I couldn't agree more, too many do gooder lawyers sticking their oar in delaying things. Tom
Date: 6/21/2020 10:33:00 PM
Tom it kept my curiosity up and was a treat to read. Thanks for your effort my friend.
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Date: 6/22/2020 3:25:00 AM
Thank you very much Michael, I'm glad you liked it. Tom
Date: 6/21/2020 4:07:00 PM
Great write Tom, I really enjoyed this one, nothing to beat a good western, Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 6/21/2020 4:40:00 PM
Thank you Gordon, happy you enjoyed it. I agree, nothing bears a good western. Tom
Date: 6/21/2020 3:54:00 PM
Yeeha! Great storytelling Tom... This flowed really well... Seems like the rain has stopped and sun has come back...
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Date: 6/21/2020 4:39:00 PM
Thank you S. O, I love stories of the old west, yes I heard its picking up again anf temps of 28c are forecast, bring it on.
Date: 6/21/2020 1:48:00 PM
Hello Tom, Wild West -- eh?? I read your rhyme here with great interest indeed. The "James Gang" is certainly an interesting theme to write about. I thoroughly enjoyed your narrative here. "Notorious" aptly describes this infamous gang for sure. Most Excellent Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 6/21/2020 2:09:00 PM
Thank you very much Gary, I'm happy that you enjoyed it. I hope all is well with you. Tom
Date: 6/20/2020 11:12:00 PM
G'day Tom … I absolutely love these 'Wild West' tales with the heroes and villains and I did enjoy yours. I attempted one named 'Slowest With a Gun' and it's posted on here. Those old westerns we watched when a kid I wouldn't miss - thanks Tom; loved this - Lindsay
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Date: 6/21/2020 5:13:00 AM
Thank you Lindsay. I grew up with a love of westerns and read many books. I'll visit your poem Hope you're well Tom
Date: 6/20/2020 10:11:00 PM
You took me to the Wild West, Tom! A great story...I enjoyed reading it tonight. Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Date: 6/21/2020 5:10:00 AM
Thank you Rhonda, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Hope you're well Tom
Date: 6/20/2020 3:26:00 PM
You are wonderful with these ballads! Your mind reels with cowboy and frontier stories!
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Date: 6/20/2020 3:30:00 PM
Thank you Kim, love the old west, Read all of Louis L'Amours books Seems to have rubbed off on me. Tom
Date: 6/20/2020 12:43:00 PM
A great story in a great rhyme with the wealth of diction and the moral of message! You captivate the heart of the reader with such a wonderful entry! Worthy of high placement! An immense pleasure to read, Tom! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 6/20/2020 2:02:00 PM
Thank you very much Besma. I'm happy that you enjoyed my story. I hope you are well, enjoy your weekend. Tom
Date: 6/20/2020 6:54:00 AM
Just love this piece. You are in rare form my friend. ;0)
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Date: 6/20/2020 7:00:00 AM
Thank you Richard, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 6/20/2020 5:37:00 AM
Reads like a winner Tom! Loved the read! Good luck in the contest!:)
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Date: 6/20/2020 6:12:00 AM
Thank you very much Brenda, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Hope alls well, enjoy your weekend. Tom
Date: 6/19/2020 9:20:00 PM
I enjoyed this Tom. Well done! Like a scene from True Grit (one of my all time favourite films) :-)
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Date: 6/20/2020 5:02:00 AM
Thank you Lisa, they done a remake of true grit but I prefer the original with John Wayne and Kim Darby. Tom
Date: 6/19/2020 9:12:00 PM
Another great tale that kept me entertained until the end. well done. if you get a chance read my "a cowpoke and his beer" and "shot from the saddle" a little western flair for you.
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Date: 6/20/2020 5:00:00 AM
Thank you Timothy, glad you liked it, I'll head over to those soon. Tom
Date: 6/19/2020 9:11:00 PM
Another great tale that kept me entertained until the end. well done. if you get a chance read my "a cowpoke and his beer" and "shot from the saddle" a little western flair for you
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Date: 6/19/2020 2:08:00 PM
A great tale you told that sure won't be rejected...love it Tom.
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Date: 6/19/2020 2:14:00 PM
Thank you very much Jeanne, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 6/19/2020 10:10:00 AM
Excellent, Tom. A great tale of Americana. If this is not first place, will eat my garden hat.-)) Admire your poetic form and artistry, maestro! Panagiota
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Date: 6/19/2020 11:45:00 AM
Thanks Panagiota, make sure it's an edible one lol. Tom
Date: 6/19/2020 8:59:00 AM
I must apologize for neglecting your poetry, Tom. I just haven't been in the soup pot lately. I wish you well with this contest entry. It's quite well done. Hugs and sweet thoughts....
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Date: 6/19/2020 11:44:00 AM
Thank you Lin, no apology needed, I hope you are keeping well. Tom
Date: 6/19/2020 6:48:00 AM
You take us back in time in this story, Tom. That is how it was done! Great story telling, as always. Glad they paid for the crimes.
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Date: 6/19/2020 6:55:00 AM
Thank you Vijay, I read all of Louis Lamours books years ago , I find the old west fascinating. Tom
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