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Abandon Dwelling Neglected-

Dwelling abandon neglected
Not at all picturesque 
This decaying house
Been condemn now for nineteen months
From the roof to the porch
Harvesting ferns in garden
Overgrown growths wild grasses dandelions
Up the swaying staircase 
Window,door crack and broken a mess
The sun and wind whispers through the downspouts and eves
Condemn and abandon only one on the block sees
This abandon decaying condemn dwelling
While over the yard weeds prostates growing rosette wilds killing
This nonpicturesque abandon neglected decaying dwelling

7/16/20
1st  Place placement in Contest
Decaying House Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Constance La France

Copyright © James Edward Lee Sr. | Year Posted 2020

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Aditi Mishra Date: 7/27/2020 4:37:00 AM This is a heartfelt muse James. Really sad emotions pictured deeply. Congratulations on your win! Blessings :) Login to Reply James Edward Lee Sr. Date: 7/27/2020 1:19:00 PM Thanks for dropping by reading my verse, Aditi... James Write on! :)

Constance La France Date: 7/25/2020 9:24:00 AM James, congratulations on your win in my decaying house contest with this excellent write, a FAV for me _Constance Login to Reply James Edward Lee Sr. Date: 7/27/2020 1:22:00 PM Thanks again for all you do, Constance. And I thank you for my placement in your contest... Write on! : ) ~James

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 7/22/2020 5:02:00 PM A sad picture you have painted with your words James. Excellent! Congratulations on your top win! Blessings xxoo Login to Reply James Edward Lee Sr. Date: 7/27/2020 1:24:00 PM Oh! Thank you so much Connie, Write On. James

Hilo Poet Date: 7/22/2020 4:36:00 PM Simply love this, James, pointedly depicted and my compliments for your win -- Aloha~@William Login to Reply James Edward Lee Sr. Date: 7/27/2020 1:25:00 PM William, thank you my friend

Jan Allison Date: 7/19/2020 3:20:00 PM Dropping back to say many congratulations on your win James :-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply James Edward Lee Sr. Date: 7/27/2020 1:17:00 PM Guess this is such a shetered verse LOL! Thank you, Jan

Jan Allison Date: 7/16/2020 4:49:00 PM you certainly have given a vivid description of a derelict house James:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply James Edward Lee Sr. Date: 7/27/2020 1:10:00 PM Thanks ! Jan Write On.