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A Young Boy's Easter

In a black morning, hollowed with eggshell delicacy...not fragile, simply gentle with dark chocolate skies....a pajamaed ten year old, with a six year old's excitement up at five a.m., with his basket ready to search out candy eggs A dew kissed morning, the blossom of an Easter sunrise Rising to greet a family,... a father, a mother, a brother, a sister A house blessed with a spirit of His presence So richly apparent, in polished shoes, combed hair, Sunday dress In hard boiled colored eggs, chocolate rabbits hidden in green grass eating baked ham and scalloped potatoes assorted aunts, uncles, cousins, grandparents Being allowed to eat his candy providing he ate at least one piece of broccoli.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/23/2009 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through with two poems in the first round of the PoetrySoup Site October Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Carrie. May 2010 be the year you see your writing endeavors become reality. Love and blessings to you and yours always, Carol
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Date: 12/22/2009 1:43:00 PM
Congrats on this one being selected. I'm a nut about children's stuff. Love, daver
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:56:00 AM
Congrats on this being nominated too!
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:46:00 AM
Carrie, Congrats on your two poems winning the first round of PS contest!! That's talent for you! smile. Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 2:09:00 PM
Two poems moving on to round two. Hurray for Carrie and Congratulations! Merry Christmas my friend, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:29:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem Carrie >> James
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Date: 4/3/2009 8:50:00 AM
Carrie this was fantastically written extra kudos and broccoli for you
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Date: 4/3/2009 6:38:00 AM
Resorting to broccoli bribery I see. Personally I never woulda thought it bout ya. Oh and by the way, one fuzzy lemon drop for Carrie!~
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Date: 4/3/2009 1:28:00 AM
Like the teaching in last verse Carrie Granmas can be that way,he'll remember that you ever..Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 4/2/2009 8:10:00 PM
Carrie Great turn of time for me I reminded me of my childhood and what I did with my daughter! Great story of holiday fun with family and friends! And then the end made the whole poem smile! Thank you for your wonderful gift you share! Love Laura :)
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Date: 4/2/2009 4:28:00 PM
Very suprised to see this poem without comments, I guess people dont comment anymore on good poetry.... enjoyed this piece and have a great day.
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Date: 4/2/2009 4:13:00 PM
Ha ha! It was years before my boy would eat anything green (except a jelly bean that is). Oh, this brings back such sweet memories. Sigh. So beautifully written. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/2/2009 12:19:00 PM
This was so cute, made me smile. your imagery is so vivid. I loved the ending, it's so true at least for me, my mom used to say we had to at least have a piece of broccoli on easter. A wonderful write thanks for sharing.Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 4/2/2009 10:37:00 AM
Wonderful reveal at the end..the broccoli and the candy...a constant battle in my home....bribery always work..good work.
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Date: 4/2/2009 9:11:00 AM
I love the mystery!! great work!! Jim
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Date: 4/2/2009 8:51:00 AM
Your touching images inspire our faith, Carrie. How wise of you to make sure he ate the broccoli. (Smile) You have an awesome command of language. It is always a pleasure to read your poetry!
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